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The tears still flow freely down my cheeks

I often wonder how it came to this

The feeling of excitement welling up inside me

Anytime I saw your name

I used to love the way you made me feel

For once I had felt loved

I could have sworn that I was almost alive

A feeling of dread quickly flooded over me

This time I pushed too far

Pushed you away into the arms of someone else

I hate thinking about it

Wondering if you tell her the same things you once told me

Do you kiss her the way you kissed me?

Everything has turned upside down

Seeing you only brings pain

I still love you

Care has never left

It's like you ripped out my heart 

Turning it to dust

Why does this have to be so painful?

I hope you are happy

That she treats you right

I will sit here by my pile of ashes

Shifting the dust of what is left in my hands

Nothing will ever be the same again

An emotional emptiness fills my whole body

The pain is more than I can bare

Reviews

[ron]

The pain of ones heart turning to ashes by another. Emotional pain makes it hard to feel anything for someone else. Love this one. I can relate to it so much.

[FlatLineBeauty]

Thank you so much my dear friend. I hope you are well. Miss you. xo Winter

[ron]

You are most welcome dear friend. I miss chatting with you to. xo

[icelandicblue]

There is a void so deep it feels like it will never be filled again. Time can be a cursed thing but it can also be a healer. It's a very emotive poem.

[FlatLineBeauty]

Time is a double edged sword of a blessing and a curse. Thank you Icelandic. xo Winter

[FlatLineBeauty]

Very raw and beautiful write, out of true felt sorrow, this is a situation, many women can relate too...
You did really a good job, on expressing these feelings Winter, your art is heartfelt, a thing many can learn from... great piece...

- Elisa

[FlatLineBeauty]

Thank you for your kind review Elisa. It is appreciated so much. xo Winter

You're very welcome Winter always a pleasure :) xoxo

[MOON]

Poignant write , the beauty of love and then the loss. Well conveyed.

[FlatLineBeauty]

Thank you for taking time to read, Moon. xo Winter

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

It hurt to read this all the emotions and the pain you have expressed so well
It made my heart a Leah have some very good lines in point I would go into that farther or further that this iPhone is a hassle
Needless to say I enjoyed it very much it is written with deep feelings and emotions

[FlatLineBeauty]

Thank you, Chloe. Your review means a lot. xo Winter

[Chloe..Across the Universe]

Winter
Very welcome

[Dhaye]

This is so emotional Winter. Wanting the person but hiding it is the hardest part of loving. Sometimes the fear we got from the past experiences hinder us to open the door for others. But this is love- we would smile or laugh, and we would cry.

Regret is that feeling that makes the wound deeper. But sometimes, we don't understand that there is a perfect time for everything, including love. What if, it's not yet the right time? What if tomorrow it would be perfect for both of you? But then, who really knows?

I understand the voice in this piece. The last line makes it more emotional- "The pain is more than I can bare."

Keep going.

[FlatLineBeauty]

Thank you so much for reading. It has been a bit hard to adjust to all this. It's like you take a shot and open up only to see them go to someone else. I've had that happen so many times I sometimes wonder why I try anymore, but then I think it's not the end and if it is meant to be then it will be. xo Winter

[Dhaye]

Yeah, it's right. If it's meant to be then it will be.
You're welcome.

[Trace]

You should never let anyone else control your feelings so strongly. take those emotions and focus them towards your own happiness. then go find someone that is more handsome and has more money.
don't worry about him, he was not the right one for you, and you deserve the happiness that you will find when your soul mate finds you. love the poem. Trace

[FlatLineBeauty]

2 words stuck out.... 1. handsome and 2. Money....
Strongly agree. Thank you for your review. xo Winter

[Laura Harrison]

Sometimes we make mistakes and then realize that it's too late to justify them This is a poem full of longing and heartbreak. Very emotional

[FlatLineBeauty]

Thank you for taking time to read this. That means a lot. xo Winter

[Vidya Bacchus]

most heart felt winter the feeling that you pushed someone you love away into the arms of someone else and realizing that it is you that cant move on.

[FlatLineBeauty]

Yeah, it is truly a curse. Sometimes I get so wrapped up in not wanting to get hurt and when I find happiness I get paranoid for no reason and I just push and isolate myself. Something I really need to work on. I have no one to blame but myself. xo Winter

[Vidya Bacchus]

That sucks but sometimes when you have been hurt bad you put up walls to protect yourself and as time goes by you realize you are all alone because you never let anyone in.

[Neon]

Am sorry to hear about this if this poem's based on yer real life.

I hope you are happy
That she treats you right...

These lines're outstanding, it's expressed how truly you loved the guy coz, true love always wishes for his or her happiness for life as you did for him. Nice poem but it's an emotional one as well. Very heart breaking/Heartfelt poem. Hey, don't forget without pain there's not a value of love and when you'll learn this .. you'll learn how to be happy even in the sad memories of love ..

May god bless you ..
Your awesome.

[FlatLineBeauty]

Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem. Yes it is based on real life. Most of my work is. Blessed be in love and light. xo Winter

[Neon]

My pleasure .. I hope now your running happily with your life .. and enjoying the beauty of life ..
Haha! Your funny .. I love seeing someone as beautiful as you feel blessed be in love especially in Winter .. Ha!

Ok .. May god bless you in every season but especially in Winter so that you could feel the warmth of love without any kinda pain or hurt :)

[FlatLineBeauty]

I actually accept the pain and the pleasures of life. The balance of both makes life beautiful. Without the pain, I would not be able to appreciate the comfort and the beauty. I do believe there is a reason for everything and although I may not understand at the time I know I will learn something from all my experiences. I am very happy with my life and thank you, for your kind words. Feel free to chat me anytime.

[Neon]

I do agree the balance of pain and pleasure make a life cool to live ... But I really hate someone as amazing and beautiful as you feel pain and hurt ...

Am happy to hear your happy.. I always love hearing from someone as beautiful as you say "feeling happy" ... Thanks for the cool words. I admired your this kind pleasure.

Well .. am here on this site only for a month because i've got my much college stuffs and i'd have not have much time to be here so, i'll leave the site and get back into the busy life .. but as long as am here on the site .. i'll try to read your stuffs and of course chat with you .. after all .. i love chatting with someone as most beautiful as you ;)

[FlatLineBeauty]

Your flattering words are very kind. Thank you again.