Intoxicated

Intoxicated

A Poem by FlatLineBeauty

Is this what it's like to be in love?

I feel so intoxicated

Almost like I am high

Like a love struck puppy

It hurts when I'm not with you

You stay in my thoughts through the day

Intoxicated by your presence

I miss you before you even leave the room

You saved me from my own prison

Turning my light into darkness

A constant smile on my face

Feeling silly and full of giggles

I have never felt so care free

As you press your lips to mine

I feel intoxicated by your love

My mind starts to wonder

Not able to think straight

I never knew I needed love so much

Opening my heart to something new

Our bodies pressed together

Wrapped in your arms

Holding hands with fingers laced

Intoxicated by your touch

Falling hard not wanting to hit the ground

The sensations feels amazing

Is this what it is like to be love struck?

© 2013 FlatLineBeauty


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I had a huge smile on my face while I was reading this :) love really is a wonderful thing. I enjoyed this piece

Posted 10 Years Ago


FlatLineBeauty

10 Years Ago

I'm happy it made you smile :) Thank you for reading xo Winter
Beautifully written, nice design, however on my screen I had to scroll through. Would be easier to read if it were in a smaller font.

Posted 10 Years Ago


FlatLineBeauty

10 Years Ago

Ah, that is a good idea. Thank you very much for reading. xo Winter
You can't help but feel happy to read this and see such bright colours - reflective of the mood of the piece.
A sweet poem - nice work :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


FlatLineBeauty

10 Years Ago

Thank you. xo Winter
I love it. Reminds me of my first love. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


FlatLineBeauty

10 Years Ago

Thank you xo Winter
Ahhh, I love this. Such a joyous poem. Love is an amazing thing, and I like what you did with the colors, it sets the mood even more. That ahh this is amazing mood.

Posted 10 Years Ago


FlatLineBeauty

10 Years Ago

thank you xo Winter
Sarah Lynn

10 Years Ago

You're welcome
such an intoxicating poem my friend lol.It is a lovely ode to love

Posted 10 Years Ago


FlatLineBeauty

10 Years Ago

Thank you Vidya xo Winter
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

you are most welcome
yes
sweet intoxication, love-sick puppy, feels like seeing a rainbow where
once 'twas grey....read this with a stupid grin on my face recalling
that feeling. a cute write

Posted 10 Years Ago


FlatLineBeauty

10 Years Ago

thank you :)
yes sweet intoxication, love-sick puppy, feels like seeing a rainbow where once 'twas grey....read this with a stupid grin on my face recalling that feeling. a cute write

Posted 10 Years Ago


i never knew i needed love so much!!! loving and being loved is the most wonderful thing!!! :) i love it... makes me wanna smile and smile and smile

Posted 10 Years Ago


FlatLineBeauty

10 Years Ago

Awe, thank you darling. xo Winter
That is what it feels like I really enjoyed your Poem to me it seems with the use of all the different colors in the lines if you are definitely lovestruck seeing everything in color things that could've in black-and-white you now see in color because love does that

Posted 10 Years Ago


FlatLineBeauty

10 Years Ago

Exactly! xo Winter
Chloe..Across the Universe

10 Years Ago

Xo happy for you winter

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