Numb

Numb

A Poem by FlatLineBeauty

Small pieces lay on the ground
Piece of my heart at my feet
Lies echo through my mind

I stare at the pieces
Watching you turn your back
You fade away like an illusion
I stare blankly
Mouth open in awe
Should have known
It's too good
To be true
Fairy tale endings
They don't exist
At least not for me
This time though
I'm not putting it back together
The tiny pieces lay where you left them
It can only break 
So many times
It's so fragile
I can't risk 
Feeling the same pain
Over and over
Numb is how I wish to stay
It's what is safe
In the end
I'm mad at me

© 2013 FlatLineBeauty


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problem is...those pieces somehow re form and creep right on back in.....Nice write though, an interesting take on the broken heart

Posted 11 Years Ago


FlatLineBeauty

11 Years Ago

yes it normally does as much as you try to keep it from happening. thank you xo winter
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I know the feeling. "Numb is how I wish to stay, It's what is safe." You hit the nail on the head with this one Winter.

Posted 11 Years Ago


FlatLineBeauty

11 Years Ago

Thanks bud. xo Winter
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11 Years Ago

You are most welcome Winter. xo
Hi Amanda,

I have going through some random writes. Found yours! The lines which really stuck the cord for me is the ending ones I'm mad at me'. You have translated your thoughts with sheer simplicity. While at times, i search some some very complicated imagery in poems, quite interestinglt, its the simplicity of few ones, which lingers longer. Good write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


FlatLineBeauty

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed it. xo Winter
you make a decision based on an internal conflict, a problem most people face. good work

Posted 11 Years Ago


FlatLineBeauty

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your review. It's appreciated. xo Winter

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Added on October 15, 2013
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