How Much You Mean to Me

I tried to write a poem for you

So you could see 

Just how much 

you mean to me

You make me laugh 

You make me smile

If only this could last

Longer than just awhile

But I couldn't think

and I couldn't describe

Just how much 

you mean to me

You're my first though in the morning

And the last closing my eyes

The thought of you

The reason for all my dreamy sighs

With how I feel for you

Nothing could explain

Just how much 

you mean to me

Reviews

[shangala]

Amanda i like your poems...expressed freely like it was a string

[FlatLineBeauty]

Thank you so much Shangala for taking time to read my work. I'm tickled pink to know you enjoy it. xo Winter

[shangala]

yuo're welcom

[Stevo The POE-t]

I really enjoyed reading this piece... Reading it I thought to myself that's the thing about writing about the person you love... The words your pen lets you write are never good enough. No matter how hard you try it just seems like you can't describe the feeling in your heart... It's like the brain can't process the thought from the Heart... But you did a really great job explaining the thought and sentiment in this one... Keep up the great work...

[FlatLineBeauty]

Thank you so much for your kind review!

[Stevo The POE-t]

You're very welcome

[melissa]

this was very sweet it was a great piece

[FlatLineBeauty]

thank you!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

You have done a great job of writing.

This is a very compelling and interesting piece, well written with a strong, clear voice and easy to read. I definitely think with the right illustrations you catch the readers attention.

Thanks for inviting me to read your very well written master piece.

[Miss Marlette]

Deep in expression and touching in its longing. Great flow and rhyme. Truly appreciated and enjoyed.

[MoriartyMesa]

An ode to anyone, be it God, Man or Beast is something worth hearing and understanding.






Some music in the background would be nice for effect.

[ron]

very beautiful. It would be nice to have some one liketh at in every ones life.

[Antoñyo]

A gentle heartfelt poem that express so easily, the true feeling of love.

Thanks for sharing

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Goodness the adoration in the lines...this piece is going to be felt for the person you intended this for in the lines...