Three words poetry challenge

Three words poetry challenge

A Poem by Winter
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A visitor came to our school during our english lesson and decided to teach us. He prepared three envelope;each consist of types of cars, animals and countries. I got MiVi, Japan and monkey.

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O Japan O Japan
The land of the rising sun
How beautiful your land is 
As I stand next to my little MiVi

Watching the pink cherry blossoms
Drifting, floating, falling
Along the soft gentle breeze
As I drink sake with this monkey

© 2016 Winter


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Hi! I actually find this very charming! Given the circumstances of how certain words were chosen. This made me smile imagining someone drinking Sake with a monkey haha.

Be well,
Ali

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Winter

8 Years Ago

Hahaha XD. Thank you! :)

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Added on August 5, 2016
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Winter

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