More.

A perfect union.

How lovely to find what you're looking for.

Fulfilling your nostalgia.

The gorgeous pelting of raindrops.

-So completely non-monolithic.- 

The moment between a dream and consciousness.

But i don't want to be what you're looking for.

How amazing to find a constant,

In a world of utter chaos and uncertainty.

The rush of the ocean, concealed in a shell.

The melody of  a storm, rocking your window.

But I don't want to simply be your constant.

I want to fill the cracks you never knew you had.

And show you an adoration,

So raw, it seeps through your collarbones

And your lips tremble, like a violin string.

Precious as the last leaf of Autumn.

Reviews

[Ravel Lopez]

I like the imagery and the overall message. I question the use of "non-monolithic." It also feels incomplete, as if there's a line or two missing. I really enjoyed it.

[Meg Craft]

This poem is amazing! Gorgeous imagery, fantastic word choice, and it flows beautifully! Keep up the amazing work! I'll be sure to check back on your work!

R.E. Imfeld