Betty Jo

Betty Jo

A Poem by Amy Whetzell
"

I think its actually a song

"
I could come back and stay

Turn around in my tracks

I could forgive and forget

Yeah I could come back

I could stay with you

and forgive the lies

give up on true love

and muffle my cries



Or I can leave you

with my head held high

wipe the last tear away

with my very last goodbye



Did you expect me to ignore the comparisons

and maybe stay a while longer

Just cover up my shame and sadness

Making you that much stronger?

I could forgive what you did

I could forget her name

I could believe your lies

and take into me all the blame



Or I can leave you

with my head held high

wipe the last tear away

with my very last goodbye



I can leave you

with my head held high

wipe the last tear away

with my very last goodbye[/size]



I'm leaving you

And my head is held high

You don't deserve me darlin'

You couldn't if you tried.

© 2008 Amy Whetzell


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Amen, sister. You do for women what so many never will. Keep holding that head up high...you rock. And yes, totally sounds like a song.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was sad and inspiring at the same time. It was very good. I felt like I was there. Looking forward to reading more.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If I say shirley murdock (did I spell that right)
does that ring a bell?
"I'm not living without you" type thing.
This is good and that's what it reminds me of.
The independant woman song but not like that.
More like a stance at I'm being free of what's holding me down.
i like it and yes
it could be a song.


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great work here! Always stay positive. Once again, a very expressive work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 13, 2008

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Amy Whetzell
Amy Whetzell

Garner, NC



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