An Artist's Vision

 

Fleeting words, restless soul

splashing words, colors, energy, emotion,

paper, hues, saturation, paint, water,

flow from my soul and manifest that which I dream.

Know me through my soul, know me through my art,

seek me in the rocks beneath the earth,

in the ocean floors,

in the petals in the wind.

I am all around you,

and know that we are one.

Know that we are connected through my art, through our souls,

through our dancing, through our remembering....

feel that connection, let it expand, let it surround you, let it feed your soul,

let it comfort you, let it be the breath that gives you life.

AWAKE.

Remember now?

Good now carry it with you, pass it on and be a living reminder of what it is like to live in heaven.

Reviews

[crap]

really moving poem, only suggestions are think about getting rid of awake, its kind of abrupt and interrupts flow, second suggestion is in line 5 maybe have it read flow "know me through me soul, through my art" just my opinion good job.