i cry

I cry

I cry for reasons you don't understand

Passionate yet emotional man

I explore for adventures and forsaken experiences

I passed all boundaries

yet i still seek for more

And i still wonder?

Should you cry when your sad

Or scream F**k it and just move on

I cryed when i was put down and told i was worthless

So i put my hat backwards and said watch this

but i cryed when I finally got what i want

so i cry,cry,cry...

Reviews

[Sunkissed Circus]

Hello, just wanted to drop by and tell you I liked this a lot. I'm not usually into poetry, but I connected with this one in particular. I like that your style is so brutal; there's no fluff added in that would make me think Robert Frost which puts me to sleep.

Please keep the poems coming, I'm looking forward to more :]

Grammar is the only critique, but it could just be a personalizing technical aspect you decided to add in, but I'm a grammar freak. No worries if the grammatical structure is for stylistic purposes, though.

[ImperfectXme]

Hey, Thank you so much for posting it means a lot...and you like Robert Frost!? Amazing! Me too one of my favorite poems by him are "Stopping by woods on a Snowy evening." Grammar,yea i wasn't thinking about it. Usually i write and just post but I will most certainly double check and revise next time.:) thank you!
-WIlson

[Sunkissed Circus]

I like "The Road Not Taken" best. Perhaps continue posting as is, and just go back and edit if you have free time :]

[Kaylor Mason]

Sometimes I think crying is a gift from God--I know what it's like to not be able to cry. Losing the ability, going numb, forgetting all emotion and just shutting down . . . t's a lot worse than it sounds sometimes. Nice work on this poem; I envy your ability to cry

[ImperfectXme]

I totally get what you mean. I agree, it is a gift from God, If i wasn't able to cry- I would be a different person and Im sure of that...Thanks alot:)