Star

I feel so invisible
Like the stars in the sky
Even though they are bright
They are millions of miles apart
And during the day they are invisible to the people who can see
But they're still there shining just as bright as they do at night
But people don't appreciate there light
And don't see their beauty

I'm just like a star
There but invisible

Author's Note

Not the best due to just writing it and not editing it so please excuse that I just had to write it because it's how I'm feeling. But hope you enjoy and leave a comment of what you think

Reviews

[hansi]

Sometimes I also want to be a star in the night sky when I was sad. Actually lot of people don't talk about the beauty of stars. But I'm very happy that you have got an idea to be a star and see the beauty of it. Nice poem. Good job.

[Eilidh]

Thank you for your lovely comment! I love the stars and I love writing about them. They're just so beautiful but no one notices very much. I would love to be a star quite a lot of the time just for these reasons:)