How does it feel?

How does it feel?

A Poem by Eilidh
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This poem is basically just about my life. I wrote it while I was going through a hard time and it just helped let everything out.

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How does it feel
To feel normal
To feel like everything around you
Isn't crumbling in your hands
And you can't stop it

How does it feel
To love yourself
And not think everyone hates you
To not hate yourself

How does it feel
To not be afraid to love
Not be afraid to be loved
Not think everyone out there is going to hurt you like she did

How does it feel
To be happy
With yourself
And with the life you live

Please tell me for i need to know
I need to know

© 2014 Eilidh


Author's Note

Eilidh
Please excuse the fact that there is no grammar, it's something i need to work on. Please let me know what you think

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I just wrote something earlier, ( that I didn't publish ) and that starts with " how does it feel like " I really get what you're trying to say through this well written poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Eilidh
Eilidh

United Kingdom



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Starter poet. Don't usually write about happy stuff so. I'm a young poet who will take any constructive criticism on board and try to improve. Also asked my beautiful girlfriend out through an origina.. more..

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