Taking a nap (falling in love on the way)

Taking a nap (falling in love on the way)

A Poem by willweb

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Taking a nap neath an old maple tree,
north of the border to wait
Seeking the girl who was made just for me,
hoping she walks through the gate

Lavender fields bloom in colorful schemes,
as if they know it is true
I saw her once at the edge of my dreams,
it was a magical view

Praising the sun as I lounge in the shade,
feeling my heart skip a beat
Answering prayers that I long ago prayed,
wishing an angel to meet

There in the shadows that dance on the ground,
footprints I long to explore
Evergreen branches, a delicate sound,
yearning her beauty once more

Images woven the back of my eyes,
whimsical thoughts now appear
Fairytale pictures and blue butterflies,
oh, how I wish she were here

Whispering softly, sending a chill,
straight down my quivering spine
Here in my arms waits a space she can fill,
every day she is mine

Holding her hand as we walk down the row,
falling in love on the way
Maybe a kiss, then I surely would know,
why I came up here today

So, here I'll rest in the cool northern wind,
wearing a sunflower smile
Hoping to dream of this woman again,
taking a nap for a while


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© 2025 willweb


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Excellent dreamy images and expectations. Nicely written poem friend

Posted 1 Day Ago


willweb

12 Hours Ago

Thanks so very much
Paints a very clear picture of "the woman of your dreams" enjoyed the read - refreshing and enjoyable - carl

Posted 1 Day Ago


willweb

12 Hours Ago

Thank you Carl.
Using 'neath instead of underneath is bad writing. This is a UK problem. Please stop doing this.

Posted 1 Day Ago


willweb

12 Hours Ago

Oh, sorry, I almost missed this one. I was reading the comment neath this one, but thanks so much.
Great story telling in this and great rhymes. I like it. :)

Posted 3 Days Ago


willweb

12 Hours Ago

Thank you so very much
Wow! This is so great! I love the flow and the creativiry. Your style reminds me of my fave poet.


Posted 3 Days Ago


willweb

12 Hours Ago

Thank you again my friend.

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Hi, I am willweb. Maybe you remember me and maybe you don't. I have been writing here on and off for years. I pop in and write and read and comment and make friends and learn new things. I enjoy maki.. more..

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