Memories are ghosts of the past. They come, uninvited, to visit us from time to time and you have very poetically embroidered the past within the lines of this very beautiful poem, dear Willweb. The imagery is breathtakingly beautiful and simultaneously poignant. The 'missing you' feeling echoes throughout the poem and is so tangible after all these years. Outstanding penning, dear poet. Thank you so very much for sharing...
Posted 7 Months Ago
7 Months Ago
Thank you once again Marie. Yes, memories will haunt at times but also bring the gift of smiles at o.. read moreThank you once again Marie. Yes, memories will haunt at times but also bring the gift of smiles at other times. Fortunately for me, I choose to smile more than frown.
7 Months Ago
You have a wonderful positive attitude, dear Willweb and how happy we feel is so very often down to .. read moreYou have a wonderful positive attitude, dear Willweb and how happy we feel is so very often down to the choices we make. Thank you again for sharing your wonderful poetry...
Chained- necklace of silver, Hung out to dry
-first rainy day, can live- when it's my turn to die, smiling inside- other is reading silencing thoughts--- they are amazing!
Some goodbyes are very hard to swallow. You've painted the emotions so well. It is beautiful!
- mou
Posted 7 Months Ago
7 Months Ago
Thank you so much Mou. Happy you liked this one, I was written based on some long ago memories
Where is that other pea and why is she not speaking to me.
This is a very clever use of metaphor...
I relate to this having just had a movie date with my ex.
Many years past the deadline...we communicate.
really good poem,
thank you,
j.
Posted 7 Months Ago
7 Months Ago
I don't lost in the salad somewhere. Glad you stopped by Jacob
Hi, I am willweb. Maybe you remember me and maybe you don't. I have been writing here on and off for years. I pop in and write and read and comment and make friends and learn new things.
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