Forever again

~

I stood in the corner with stars in my eyes,

such magical thoughts on display

A poetic verse coming as no surprise,

it's funny the things I might say

While counting each petal I pulled from a rose

and leaving the mess far behind

I reached to the heavens, the tip of my toes,

for something that fell from my mind

With sparkles and sprinkles in colors so bright,

to carry the less of the load

So tied up in knots that were pulled ever tight

and scattered about on the road

I pulled out my pen and the cleanest white sheet,

a canvas of paper in hand

To write down these thoughts if we ever should meet,

just hoping you would understand

I folded it neatly and tucked it inside,

then scanned every face in the crowd

When spying such beauty, you just couldn't hide,

my heart started beating quite loud

I summoned the courage and called out your name,

your smile it grew ear to ear

You ran through the people, I just can't explain,

that something so special was near

I loved you forever, but that time has gone,

still, you were my wonderful dream

With every sunset and every dawn,

your beauty a part of my scene

You grabbed me and kissed me with stars in your eyes,

just hoping my thoughts I had penned

I gave you the poem, so you'd realize,

I'll love you forever again

 ~

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

Excellent writing. Touching my heart. Enjoyed reading 👍

[willweb]

Thank you so much

[Gee]

Relic kinda summed up what most of us will feel when reading this. You're good Will, very...

[willweb]

Thanks my friend. Glad you liked it.

[Pete]

ever the romantic. cleverly touching. good flow and rhyme scheme. very vivid scenes and feelings painted. laughed at the 'mess of petals'. great job. much enjoyed.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Pete. Glad you came by to visit

[Coyote Poetry]

Will, a wonderful poem with a happy ending.
"You grabbed me and kissed me with stars in your eyes,
just hoping my thoughts I had penned
I gave you the poem, so you'd realize,
I'll love you forever again"
The above lines. A grand wish for the most of us. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Coyote for your nice comment

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.

[Dave Brown]

another impressive offering
very nicely done

[willweb]

Thanks Mr. Dave.

[Papaya]

Yeah, I agree with Relic. So good!!!

[willweb]

Thanks so much Ana. I appreciate you.

[Papaya]

Always a pleasure. 🙂

[Relic]

Awesome and perfect. This is one of those poems I wish I had written. :)

[willweb]

Thanks Relic, So nice to see you again.

[Amy R]

A beautiful poem,
a very nice write with a rhythmic flow.
It reflects towards a past love. Conveying a sense of nostalgia and longing for a lost relationship.
Thank you for sharing.
-Amy

[willweb]

Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words.

[Amy R]

You're welcome

[꧁Ash꧂]

Amazing! It reminds me of writing from my friends on Commaful.It has a dark vibe and is an excellent read!

[willweb]

Thanks so much Ash. Glad you liked it.