Missing

 

 ~

Down on the beach today, 

I've got nicely chilled cabernet, 

some delicious cheese and fruits, 

a couple of comfortable beach chairs, 

a few soft towels, a big wool blanket 

and a brightly colored 

mbrella 

 

there is only one thing missing 

 

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

A special note to a special person who, - surely, must be smiling!

[willweb]

I hopes so. : ) Thank you dear Emma for always being so kind.

[Brokensoul]

So cute and quirky :) Liked it

[willweb]

Thank you so much.

[Papaya]

Very cute! You also spelled coloured wrong 🙂

[willweb]

Nice catch! That's why you are one of my favorites...oops, I mean favourites. : )
Thanks so much Ana.

[Einstein Noodle]

well :))))))))))))) ... if i place me self there my friend ... there are more than one thing missing .. love this one .. playful .. romantic and wistful... really good stuff from the tire to the road .. love on ya .. peace and joy
E.

[willweb]

Thanks my friend and yes, I think I know what you mean. : )

[Amy R]

A very relaxing poem, setting and everything so fine.
But the only one thing missing is (U)mbrella!

Very creative with the way you write,
-Amy

[willweb]

Thank you again, Just my attempt at a little poetic humor.

[Amy R]

Very nice, you're welcome.