Behind the dunes

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I saw the sunrise blush

as the moon and the stars

disappeared behind the dunes . . .

I wonder what they were doing?

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Sounds like a beautiful scene to watch

[willweb]

It was but I looked away, I wanted to give them a little privacy. : ) Thank you for reading and leaving a nice comment for me to find

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome

[Neville]

Am smiling at the thought you made me think Will .. a lovely little thing indeed .. Neville

[willweb]

Thanks so much Neville. Now, look away from the dunes.

[Neville]

consider it dune sir W .. N

[Amy R]

Oh wow, what a cute little poem, I enjoyed this.

[willweb]

Thanks, glad you liked it.

[Amy R]

You're welcome

[Andra Davis]

Probably romancing the lights out of each other. That's what they're created to do, aren't they? So imaginative and lovely.

[willweb]

That could very well be Andra. You never know with the moon and stars. : ) Thank you so very much for your nice thoughts

[Marie]

Oh, I just love this precious succinct poem with a question for the reader. Sunrise captured so poetically. I guess sunrise is bedtime for Luna and the stars before the sunset arrives and they are due back for the night shift once more! Lovely, lovely write! Thank you for sharing Willweb...

[willweb]

Thank you Marie, my friend for your kind and flattering comments about my little piece here. I just love the sunrise and the sunset and the moon and... well, nature in general. There is so much beauty to see if you just take the time to look.

[Marie]

Most welcome, Willweb. I agree 110% with your kind response. Thank you again for sharing...

[Papaya]

Very cute! They're probably getting busy creating a new day. 🙂

[willweb]

Now, I like that answer...wished I'd have thought of that.
Thanks again Ana, glad you came to visit on this 'new day". : )

[Papaya]

You're welcome. My pleasure! 🙂☀️⭐

[emmajoygreen]

What memories your poem holds, what adventures and dreams. Pretty sure you can guess, sir.

[willweb]

Thank you dear Emma. I am happy you found this one to your liking. As always, I appreciate when you come by.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I hope Lydia is careful of those broken shells.
Maybe the sunrise saw the moon and stars dancing naked...
fig leaves dropped somewhere in the milky way.
j.

[willweb]

I hope she is too, and she as well needs to keep an eye out for horseshoe crabs. Those suckers can really hurt. Thanks my friend.

[Lydia Shutter]

I love this one, Will...brings me back to the days when a walk on the beach at sunrise was oh so romantic. Now I would probably step on a broken shell and need stitches! :) Short, but full of imagery. Lydi**

[willweb]

I know what you mean, Thanks so much Lydi.