A Composition of Love

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The happy sunrise brightly sings 

a duet with the dawn 

As hummingbirds and meadowlarks 

join in to sing along 

 

Strings so tuned in harmony, 

the music that we hear 

Sweet within our open hearts, 

symphonic and so clear 

 

Echoed whispers on the breeze 

caress our longing skin 

As the sonnet of your kiss 

does find my lips again 

 

Instrumental wishes float 

in dreams that we shall play 

Melodies of perfect love 

composed this springtime day  

 

Reviews

[poetgurl]

This is such a wonderful, beautiful write. enjoyed

[willweb]

Thank you so much for your visit and nice comment

[poetgurl]

not a problem

[Papaya]

This is really beautiful and has a warm and serene feel to it.
Love it. 🐦💛

[willweb]

Happy you stopped by to sing along. I didn't think it could sound nicer, but it does. : ) Thanks so much Ana.

[Papaya]

You're welcome! Happy that someone finally appreciates my singing!
🙂😅🎶

[Ted Kniffen]

The rhyme and the flow of these words certainly convey a calm and heartfelt message of a peaceful morning and a love that goes along with that emotion.

Well done Will

[willweb]

Thanks so much Ted. I am thrilled you liked this one.

[Chris Shaw]

Hello will, a fine uplifting piece of love poetry. Certainly lightens the mood. Plenty of harmonious music here along with wonderful imagery. A good solid piece of romance.

Chris

[willweb]

Thanks so much Chris. Happy you enjoyed the melody of this one.

[Thomas W Case]

Great imagery. You make it come alive.

[willweb]

Thank you so much

[Davidgeo]

Your words lighten the load of existence a little bit for personal reasons. Good work sir.

[willweb]

Happy they found you when you needed them. Thanks so much.

[Amy R]

Loving this poem, very nice imagery too, it brings it all alive,
and also I enjoyed the rhythms of this poem.

It carries so much beauty of the sunrise/nature, reminding us about a moment of beauty and
love that is timeless and eternal..

-Amy

[willweb]

Thank you for your kind words Amy. Glad you liked this

[Amy R]

You're welcome.