lonely horizon

~

the setting sun

caressed a lonely horizon

like a good night kiss

that couldn't wait

for morning to return

~

Reviews

[Dave Brown]

Something different and every bit as enjoyable
In the reverse mode, ie; rising sun cracking the wide horizon, I purchased the 'Lawrence of Arabia' film just to be able to watch the rising sun crack the immense horizon.
Good morn 2U willweb

[willweb]

Good morning Dave. Thanks for the visit and kind words. Cloudy this morning no sunrise to see defined in the eastern sky.

[Vol]

WW
The feminine Yin waiting for the return of her lover, Yang. Sweet imagery, sir...
Vol

[willweb]

Thanks Vol. I appreciate your visit

[jacob erin-cilberto]

This reminds me of Romeo and Juliet and their conversation on the Balcony.
"I shall say goodnight until it be 'morrow."
j.

[willweb]

Hey, a comparison to Shakespear, I'll take it. Thanks so much Jacob

[Seriana]

The sun is a powerful force, warming and touching in a way to give peace to a weary soul.

[willweb]

It certainly is, not to mention a great inspiration for poetry. Thanks so much my friend.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This is beautiful, my friend. I love a good sunset and a beautiful sunrise, even more.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Fabian. Glad you liked this

[Soren]

Now here is a short one stanza poem that speaks with great metaphor and tenderness to the heart and soul. Magnificent

[willweb]

Thanks so much my friend.

[emmajoygreen]

Tenderly thought, fleeting moments personified.

[willweb]

Thank you so much Emma. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

[Papaya]

Really great brevity that captures a tender moment with feeling.

[willweb]

I always appreciate your visits and kind words. Feel free to stop by anytime. Thanks so much Ana.

[Amy R]

I like this poem, very nice,
It captures a moment of quiet beauty and contemplation, where the setting sun evokes feelings of solitude and longing...
& the anticipation for the return of morning lingers heavily.
GREAT write.
-Amy

[willweb]

Thank you Amy for your nice comment on my little poem. Yep, you captured the theme very well.

[Amy R]

Aww, you're very welcome. :)

[Chris Shaw]

Visually beautiful will. How the lonely horizon must have welcomed that kiss. Lovely brevity. Felt this one on an emotional level.

Chris

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Chris. Happy you enjoyed this little piece.