Ocean breeze

A cresting

wave

of shimmered

light

caresses warm

this

slumbered shore

As moonbeams

whisper

in the night

on

seafoam winds

so soft

and pure

I walk along

this

silent view

my

footprints follow

paths

with ease

For here my

thoughts

they float of

you

in dreams upon

the

ocean breeze

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I want to feel a seafoam wind...
I have past lovers I think of like in this poem.
The dreams float ...and I try to remember the positives.
I really like this poem and the variety of your work, will.
Never a dull moment with your poetry.
j.

[willweb]

You know my friend, I am the same except, all I can remember are the positives and they feel so good. Thanks so much Jacob.

[Papaya]

Beautiful poetry from you. Can feel that breeze and toes in the sand.

[willweb]

Thank you Ana. Happy you visited and left your footprints here for me to find. I appreciate your kind words.

[Papaya]

My pleasure, you're welcome 😊

[Chris Shaw]

I have walked the shore line many a time and felt the ocean breeze by moonlight. Your poem is beautifully visual will and romantic too. Wonderful poetry. So good to see you posting.

Chris

[willweb]

Thanks a bunch Chris. There is something very soothing and romantic about strolling the beach after dark.

[Amy R]

What a lovely little poem,.
A magical picture painted too.

"For here my
thoughts
they float of
you
in dreams upon
the
ocean breeze" What a beautiful stanza. 🤍

-Amy

[willweb]

Thank you Amy. Some just float about your mind like that. (and hopefully they never leave).

[Amy R]

Very true, you're welcome.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Sounds like a nice stroll on the beach.
We can feel the magic of the ocean.
And the reminder of a loved one.
Keep it up! Take good care Will.
😄

[willweb]

Thanks for walking along with my poetry today. I appreciate your visit

[The_Ancient_Rock]

You are most welcome, friend.
Keep it up!
Take good care.
😄

[Neville]

.. What's not to like .. this is so well versed, one can almost taste the saline .. Neville

[willweb]

Happy you stopped by the beach today my friend.

[Neville]

My pleasure will .. N :)