The Edge

The Edge

A Poem by willweb

She skipped along the edge of the lake,
her refection dancing upon it's clear smooth surface,

soft hair flowing
in the cool November breeze...

singing a melodic autumn song
while happily tossing flower petals
into the water...

and as I watch from the thicket
at the edge of the woods,
I am mesmerized by her charm

when it occurs to me...

I have never seen the lake
look more beautiful

© 2024 willweb


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

I enjoyed reading such a sweet poem,
I liked the imagery in this poem as well!

-Amy

Posted 8 Months Ago


willweb

8 Months Ago

Thanks so much
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Amy R

8 Months Ago

You're welcome.
This is a beautiful write. I enjoyed this, I felt a longing in your words

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

willweb

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much

2
next Next Page
last Last Page
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

278 Views
12 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on April 8, 2024
Last Updated on April 30, 2024

Author

willweb
willweb

TX



About
Hi, I am willweb. Maybe you remember me and maybe you don't. I have been writing here on and off for years. I pop in and write and read and comment and make friends and learn new things. I enjoy maki.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..