I like

I like

A Poem by willweb

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I like, 

pizza and novels,  

petunias and daydreams 

Balconies, nighttime and  

stardust and moonbeams 

Sunrises, roosters and  

fresh morning dew 

But most of all,  

what I like best is you 

 

I like, 

jellybeans, limousines,   

seagulls and beaches 

Poems and drawings and  

someone who teaches 

Strawberry bubblegum,  

tasty to chew 

But most of all,  

what I like best is you 

 

I like,  

gardens and arbors 

with pink jasmine clinging 

Holding hands, kissing while 

bluebirds are singing 

Lions and tigers and 

trips to the zoo 

But most of all, 
what I like best is you 

 

I like, 

Vanilla ice cream with  

caramel and sprinkles 

Irons we use to get out 

all the wrinkles 

Something that's old as 

opposed to brand new 

But most of all, 
what I like best is you 

 

I like, 

magazines, straw hats,  

 cucumbers and pickles 

Slippers, pajamas and  

down pillow tickles 

Green beans and cabbage in  

grandma's beef stew 

But most of all,  

what I like best is you 

 

I like, 

laughter and smiles and 

purple toothbrushes 

Mushrooms and trumpets,  

a child who blushes 

Still, I must say since 

the words are so true 

What I like best, yes, 

will always be you 



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© 2024 willweb


Author's Note

willweb
I could have kept going, but I didn't want to bore you. : )

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this is ever so sweet will but I am sure you have already been made aware of that .. I must also confess that I am a list kinda guy myself and never tire of them .. smiles :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


willweb

6 Months Ago

Thanks so much my friend, happy you had fun checking this one off (out). : )
Who could be bored with this? To be adored endlessly by one such as you? Such beautiful imagery painted on the page, when I close my eyes, it will never, ever age. :)

You've outdone yourself. Sweetly and subtly rhymed. Not too much to overwhelm. I think you could have kept going :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


willweb

6 Months Ago

Thanks so much my friend. Sorry for the late reply.
Ahh, i ee you haven't issed your mark yet Will and can only apologise for my lack of reviewing, which is something i am trying to get back into after a bit of a lay off.
Your list of likes makes me remember things from childhood that until read, i had completely forgotten about like orange flavour push ups, which are the bestest, even before remembering that they were the reason i got my first ever kiss. Walking back from the store with our iced delights, we giggled at the coldness of our lips, before the beautiful Jennifer gave me a frozen lipped kiss before joining the rest of the girls in their playground, while it might have been her i remember more that actually heated my lips up more, because i was a bit red in the face all afternoon! Which got rid of my frozen lips almost immediately.
This was going to be a kist of things i like, but noe i realise that now remembering it, i cant think of anything else!
Maybe i should have kept that one too tge last, because i now have a compulsion to find an orange flavour push up. 😊
As always Sir, excellently done.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Beautiful!
The love and affection definitely shows. I love it!

Posted 9 Months Ago


willweb

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much
something like this could never bore this reader.

I had an old girlfriend who used to tell me she was "in like with me"
There are so many things to like, and there are so many reasons to "like the one your with"--pardon me Stephen Stills.
j.

Posted 9 Months Ago


willweb

9 Months Ago

Thanks Jacob. Now that song is stuck up there...If you can't be with the one you like, you gotta lik.. read more
that is definitely atona likes
they all could keep a guy busy

Posted 9 Months Ago


willweb

9 Months Ago

They sure could. : ) Thanks Dave
It is good to have a wide ranging list of likes. Much easier on the soul than the same thing in hates.

Posted 9 Months Ago


willweb

9 Months Ago

Yep, you've got that right
I like pizza a whole bunch myself :p A fine optimistic read this blustery morning

Posted 9 Months Ago


willweb

9 Months Ago

Thanks so much John
this was so fun to read :) felt like a secret confession in a hand made card at school.
innocent. sweet. never-ending in a good way of course.
this poem beats any "rose are red - violets are blue" love confession.
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roses are red ~ violets are blue
what i like best ~ will always be you
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see. not as good as yours. lol
but seriously. your rhythming and imagery in this poem was {as always} beautiful.

Posted 9 Months Ago


willweb

9 Months Ago

Thanks so much for the great comment on my poem. I am glad you liked this one, it was a lot of fun t.. read more

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