this is ever so sweet will but I am sure you have already been made aware of that .. I must also confess that I am a list kinda guy myself and never tire of them .. smiles :)
Posted 6 Months Ago
6 Months Ago
Thanks so much my friend, happy you had fun checking this one off (out). : )
Who could be bored with this? To be adored endlessly by one such as you? Such beautiful imagery painted on the page, when I close my eyes, it will never, ever age. :)
You've outdone yourself. Sweetly and subtly rhymed. Not too much to overwhelm. I think you could have kept going :)
Posted 8 Months Ago
6 Months Ago
Thanks so much my friend. Sorry for the late reply.
Ahh, i ee you haven't issed your mark yet Will and can only apologise for my lack of reviewing, which is something i am trying to get back into after a bit of a lay off.
Your list of likes makes me remember things from childhood that until read, i had completely forgotten about like orange flavour push ups, which are the bestest, even before remembering that they were the reason i got my first ever kiss. Walking back from the store with our iced delights, we giggled at the coldness of our lips, before the beautiful Jennifer gave me a frozen lipped kiss before joining the rest of the girls in their playground, while it might have been her i remember more that actually heated my lips up more, because i was a bit red in the face all afternoon! Which got rid of my frozen lips almost immediately.
This was going to be a kist of things i like, but noe i realise that now remembering it, i cant think of anything else!
Maybe i should have kept that one too tge last, because i now have a compulsion to find an orange flavour push up. 😊
As always Sir, excellently done.
I had an old girlfriend who used to tell me she was "in like with me"
There are so many things to like, and there are so many reasons to "like the one your with"--pardon me Stephen Stills.
j.
Posted 9 Months Ago
9 Months Ago
Thanks Jacob. Now that song is stuck up there...If you can't be with the one you like, you gotta lik.. read moreThanks Jacob. Now that song is stuck up there...If you can't be with the one you like, you gotta like the one you're with. : ) Joking aside...some of the best music...we grew up at the best time for music.
this was so fun to read :) felt like a secret confession in a hand made card at school.
innocent. sweet. never-ending in a good way of course.
this poem beats any "rose are red - violets are blue" love confession.
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roses are red ~ violets are blue
what i like best ~ will always be you
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see. not as good as yours. lol
but seriously. your rhythming and imagery in this poem was {as always} beautiful.
Posted 9 Months Ago
9 Months Ago
Thanks so much for the great comment on my poem. I am glad you liked this one, it was a lot of fun t.. read moreThanks so much for the great comment on my poem. I am glad you liked this one, it was a lot of fun to write, that's for sure.
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