Only to hold you once more

~

 

Stood at the crossroads of passion and truth,

placing my face to the wind

Calling in echoes, your fragrance the proof,

once again, now to begin

 

Knowing this feeling that takes me away,

somewhere this heart it does sing

Forecasted sunshine my eyes it will play,

love is a wonderful thing

 

Can’t help believing that you feel it too,

beneath the heavens so free

All that I am I shall be that for you,

forever romantically

 

Hoping you smile when thinking of this,

praying this message to send

So you will know with the touch of your kiss,

my heart starts beating again

 

Now here I wait as I stare to the skies,

filled with my thoughts ever pure

Wishing so softly in love filtered sighs,

only to hold you once more

 

~

Reviews

[William Michael Reeves]

Isn't that sweet. As for your thoughts being pure ... I'll take the poets loving words at that. Loving. Lovely love poem will.

[willweb]

Thank you again. I appreciate your time and comments. Glad you enjoyed this one.

[Lorry]

Your flow and rhythm here Will, takes us back to a time where gentleman bowed and doffed their hats (any excuse to use the word doffed! 😊) and woman blushed in response. These days you could barely make a lass blush unless you sandpaper Ed her face for a fortnight! But I digress.
(ooh, digress is another!)
Now what was I saying? Oh yes,
Another fine piece written here again, that gets you a gold star and now you may saunter, gambol or stroll to the top of the class! 😊 🌟

[willweb]

Yes indeed, those days when men were overdressed, and woman were jealous. When it was a sad moment when your hanky fell from your sleeve and got stuck to the heel of your show whilst parading down the avenue claiming it was just powder from your wig, not dandruff on your shoulders. Thanks so much my friend.

[Pencil in His Hand]

Evocative. Thank you for sharing.

[willweb]

Thanks so much for your visit.

[Pencil in His Hand]

Pleasure🙂🌻blessings

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh, Will....this is so very romantic. Bittersweet when the love of your life is no longer on this earth. Still, you stare at the moon and stars and hope she will know you still love her. Like a fairy tale, but so sweet. Lydi**

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Lydi for you wonderful review of my work.

[Arundass TP]

I felt the poem is touching and has interesting line's throughout.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the incurable romantic in me wants to believe in this...
it just does.
j.

[willweb]

You never know I guess Jacob. Things happen and often we have no idea they are coming.

[John the Baptist]

If ever I feel the need to write love notes to a lady, I'm going to ask you to do it for me. Just hope my wife doesn't see them.

[willweb]

If it happens, it will be our secret.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

I so enjoy the lyrical quality of this piece. It really is musical in its flow. And like a love song it taps emotionally to any heart that has known love. Great work Will.

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Carlos. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

[Stella Armour]

oh you romantic you .... done it again ..
perfect , gentle and Willweb style

Beautiful my friend :)

[willweb]

Thank you my friend for always leaving a smile waiting for me causing me to do the samee.

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

The desire for a connection that transcends boundaries, where two souls can come together and experience the beauty of love. Well done 👍

[willweb]

Thank you again for your kind comments on my poetry. I am happy you liked this.