wildflower

~

 

 

What if I,

came rolling through your pasture

 

Touched your hair,

like summer whispers on the breeze

 

You are all,

of every wildflower

 

As you take your bloom,

beneath the cedar trees

 

What if life,

were singing through your petals

 

As you bend your stem,

to reach your song to me

 

I will always,

look through greener pastures

 

Find your beauty,

a wildflower growing free

Reviews

[Summer Lynn]

Beautifully written. You really paint a picture with your words.

[willweb]

Thanks so much I am happy you liked this.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Your words are like petals, your poems a garden. I am always struck by the beauty of your soul and how you emanate like a light.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Linda. Such a nice thing to say

[Patricia Wedel]

A lovely Breeze with Petals of a Wild Flower touching you... flying free...
Your Heart is beating to a Drum when Love becomes the Clouds that sleep within your Soul. Summer dreams and Bird song. Be still my Heart... Pat

[willweb]

Thank you Pat for thee beautiful thoughts on my little poem. I am thrilled this one has touched you in this way. Thank you so much again.

[Ken Simm.]

A beautiful pastorale song of nature. Such sweet flowing.

[willweb]

Thanks Ken. I am glad you dropped by and enjoyed what you found.

[emmajoygreen]

Anyone who sees the true beauty of a wild flower has my vote and admiration. Good and wise of you, sir"

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Emma. I love wildflowers for the beauty they bring and the freedom they express. The world would be a better place if more enjoyed the wonders of nature.

[emmajoygreen]

The garden speckled with wild flowers has dozens more butterflies too, willweb. We agree with how one's garden should be, could be. Hope more rain will be dropping by soon. Not Florida weather however, must be horrific.

[Re-Pete]

truly beautiful from start to finish. such sentiment. love those wildflowers. poetry at its finest. bravo ... :)

[willweb]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Miss Sharon]

So beautiful! Love this from start to finish. ~Sharon

[willweb]

Thank you so much Sharon

[Chris Shaw]

The couplet format works well here will. A truly romantic write with lovely imagery. Wildflowers have their own unique beauty. Very nicely penned.

Chris

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Chris.

[AYVID N]

This poem had a softly flowing, breeze like touch to it. The breeze loves the wildflowers and whispers and caresses them. Such is the bond between a beloved and her lover. A very fascinating and beautiful expression of love.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much my friend.

[Lorry]

Well Will, I would put on my finest southern belle accent and say "Will you unhand me sir? I'm not that type of lady! 😊
Although I do find wildflowers to be one of the loveliest surprises in nature, that have been known to slow my roll to a standstill, as I pause my journey to breathe in eau du nature at its finest and sigh how good life can be, before plodding merrily on my way again.
Well, I say plodding, but we all know I really meant skipping! 😊

[willweb]

Happy you skipped by this one today my friend. Please, feel free to stop and enjoy what you find whenever you are out in the fields. : )

[Lorry]

Will do my friend.... 🎶 la la lah de la Di dah 🎶 😊