Undressing nature

Undressing nature

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Lovely pink roses on a stone wall

like buttons on a cotton dress,

climbing to the top,

opening when the light finds

spring breeze interludes frolicking beyond the

painted iron gate

 

Swinging hinges sing the melody of love

as delicate thorns pull at cloth canopies

of translucent chiffon and soft lace hue,

releasing vine clung threads,

knotted of perfume, watching as buttons

free fall to the lawn, like so many petals

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Reviews

[Lorry]

A beautiful picture painted with your words Will, yet again. I could almost feel the breeze on my face, which considering we're in a heatwave right now and nary a sigh is blowing, was a very welcome distraction.
I'd say I'll never complain about winter again, but we both know that is a lie 😊

[willweb]

It has been very hot down here, even for us so...complaining is just something we do. : ) Thanks Lorry

[Soyam]

The description of the lovely pink roses on a stone wall is simply enchanting. The imagery of buttons on a cotton dress and the interplay of light, breeze, and delicate thorns creates a beautiful and vivid scene. The cascading petals and the delicate fragrance add a touch of whimsy and romance.

Wonderful job! Keep penning:)

[willweb]

Thank you so very much. I am thrilled you enjoyed this

[jacob erin-cilberto]

This is so real, I looked out my window to see if I could get a view of it...unfortunately not in the literal sense, but in the poetic sense, absolutely.

j.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Jacob. Yeah, I looked out my window and saw a parking lot, but, it is amazing what you can see with your eyes closed. : )