Silhouettes in moonlight

 

~

 

Cotton candy swirls

on a pink flamingo sky

Dandelion wishes

that are slowly floating by

Apricot horizons

glowing softly ‘cross the hill

Twilight born emotions

falling on this night so still

 

Sweet seductive touches

to caress my quivered skin

Satin slipper kisses

moist along my lips again

Silhouettes in moonlight

move in rhythm ‘pon the ground

Whispers in the darkness

sing a most melodic sound

 

Sighs that lace the heavens

flow from breaths in rapid pace

Tickles formed of pleasure

bring a smile to your face

Midnight moans encircle

as your beauty leaves me numb

Finding love this evening

waiting for the dawn to come

 

~

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Such beautiful description and soft imagery to accompany your midnight moans in these three stanzas. Love apricot horizons, satin slipper kisses. The title is super. It draws the reader in. Another wonderful love poem. Well done will.

Chris

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Chris. I am thrilled you stopped by my poetry for a read. And more thrilled you liked it.

[William Michael Reeves]

I like how you adjust adjectives to suit your reality. Descriptive destruction of sanity. Maybe that's what writing about love is. At writing poetry, you are a whiz!

billigami

I wish that one line was, 'tickled forms of pleasure'. But what would I know about that.

Bill

[willweb]

hey, that lines sounds good too. I actually like it a bit better.

[William Michael Reeves]

I stumbled a little on tickles formed. Sorry if I care about your poetry enough to be bold enough to express that. We stumble on!

[willweb]

Hell, I stumble too...what a response I left. I meant to say that I really liked the line you suggested better than the one I wrote.

[Soyam]

"Your fantastic way has laid your finger on the springs of ordinary madness."
~ Soya

"...Midnight moans encircles
As your beauty leaves me numb..."

These lines, hits a different way :|

Anyways, beautiful work! Keep it up.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much.

[John the Baptist]

I've always believed midnight moans are hard to top, but then, so are any moans, provided the source is the right one. As to satin slipper kisses, they must have a lot of sole in them.

[willweb]

Indeed they do and you will find they are usually the perfect fit. : )

[Neville]

what's not to like .. this has just about everything a decent love poem needs and then some .. N :)

[willweb]

Thanks so much my friend. I always appreciate your visits.

[Neville]

and I look forward to making them :)

[Lorry]

Sounds like a view to enjoy all night, with the one that helps you see such magical sights.
I have been guilty at different times of my life, of trudging around, looking at my feet so as not to make ete contact with anyone, while simply looking upwards would reset my perspective on what magic we miss when caught out in "poor me" mode.
The ground is always gonna just be something we stand on, but up there is where we find our true inspiration.

[willweb]

I used be exactly the same way but not the "poor me" mode, I just used to stare down hoping to find some kind of treasure or cool item until I realized that I could find that and more by looking up.
Thanks Lorry...happy to see you on my page again.

[duff]

There's some great imagery on display. Nice work

[willweb]

Thanks so much Duff.

[Mike]

Real rhythm. A pleasure to read.

[willweb]

Hey thanks Mike, glad you stopped by and found something you liked.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

This is a beautifully layered, heavenly painted love poem. The visuals and the colors are striking. Well penned.

[willweb]

My sweet friend, coming from someone of your talent, your beautiful reviews always leave me humbled.

[AYVID N]

A poem replete with passion mingled with lovely hues of nature. Dandelions are airborne and so are all the wishes and dreams of love. Stunning imagery and beautiful thoughts, dear Willweb. Your words always leave me high.

[willweb]

Dear divya,
as always, thank you so much for your kind words and your wonderful support of my poetry. Your visits are happiness to me

[AYVID N]

Always my pleasure, my friend Willweb.