Never too late

Yep, another love poem. : )

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I soften my eyes on the promise fueled sunset,

coffee dark skies in a marmalade blush

Twilight now tinted of wayward decisions,

meadowlarks sing in a smooth whispered hush

 

Apricot streamers of old-fashioned colors

born ever new on the heaven’s a’ play

Fluffy cloud tickles in windswept arrangements,

pillowy grasses the hillside now sway

 

Valleys are calling 'neath mountaintop echoes,

candlelight features throughout all aglow

Beyond the fence line a fragrance is waiting,

sweet on the air in a northerly flow

 

Corn field desires paint simplistic patterns,

run with me there down the row ever straight

Listen, our hearts speak in feathered emotions,

love comes to prove it is never too late

 

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Reviews

[red93]

Nicely phrased and well put together WW. Nice structure with the rhymes and a good positive message ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[willweb]

Thanks so much.

[William Michael Reeves]

I wish this poem was longer! I wanted more. The cornfield can be a fence, and if you build a place for love, it will come. Whispered hush is how this one felt.

[willweb]

Thanks so much my friend. I am glad you liked this and am humbled by your comments.

[Soren]

The last line is the hook. It is so true that it is never too late. Your images continue to enthrall me and lift my mind to a higher plain. The lines do make me hungry not only for beautiful poetry but food.

[willweb]

Thanks so much my friend. I guess I must have written this while I was hungry. : )

[Alla Antsis]

Willweb,
This is more than a poem, this is the talented watercolor painting with ever more details at every brash! Absolutely a delight!

[willweb]

Thank you so very much my friend.

[AYVID N]

Dear Willweb,

Reading this poem filled me with much hope. It's never too late. The heart in this poem feels ready to fly and soar as a bird with emotions aflame. Its not our state or our circumstances but our readiness to believe in love and our readiness for love that truly count. A wonderful poem on love that's truly elating and joy inspiring!

[willweb]

Thank you my friend. Your kindness is always welcome on my page. I am happy this one opened your eyes to what just may be waiting down the road. Thanks again Divya.

[AYVID N]

You are more than welcome, dear friend.

[John the Baptist]

The setting seems lovely, the time seems right, but tell me, what exactly are "feathered" emotions?

[willweb]

Well, it's a love thing, you know like when because you are in love you feel lighter than air, like you are floating, your feet not touching the ground? That is a feathered emotion. : ) It is a light and happy feeling deep inside.

[Silmara McGarry]

What a wonderful write you have here, so involving and such great pleasure to your readers! I truly love it and even more so the absolutely perfect end👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Well done!!!

[willweb]

Thank you so very much. I am happy you liked this one.