Teasing horizon

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A beautiful sunset

embraced a naked sky

in sensual reflections

as a blushing twilight waited

quietly in the shadows hoping

the moon didn’t see

Reviews

[Cherrie]

Sensual use of images textured with the colors of the heavens.

[willweb]

Thank you so much Cherrie

[duff]

The title is great. The colors are enticing. There is a playfulness that's clever and teasing.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Duff. I like sneakers. : )

[FGFRANKLIN]

Cool wordplay. I love it! Great job.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Fabian.

[William Michael Reeves]

The sunset caught a peak at sky
in a mirror of waters shy
the light then waned when sun did hide
behind the moon's darker side.
Both orbs were caught in wonder's eye
as sky felt their gaze, yet, never shied,
then spread the day and night really wide!

Inspiring web, will.
billigami

[willweb]

Hey thanks...A nice companion piece for the poem. I appreciate your time and support. You never know what you might catch nature up to.

[William Michael Reeves]

I always hope a poet might keep the story going when billigami does that. Many threads this web could follow.

[willweb]

I will remember that the next time. : )

[AYVID N]

The personification of the sunset, the sky, the moon and the twilight made the poem so sensual to read. A very creative stroke of your quill here, Willweb. The effect was awesome!

[willweb]

Thank you so much again Divya. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

[Lorry]

The moon may have been too busy looking for people with binoculars looking at the scene you've painted here Will.
I tried sering, but the trees and shrubbery all ganged together and hid what was going on from sight, by bristling their foliage and long story short, I broke my binoculars when the swat team kicked in my door and now I have to paint over graffiti for six months! 😊

[willweb]

I hope the graffiti was poetic because if not, that job would really suck. You can borrow my binoculars if you like.

[John the Baptist]

Twilight needn't worry. The moon has seen much, much worse.

[willweb]

I'm sure it has. Thanks my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

From praying creatures to Erotica, you cover splendidly a wide range of topics and subjects.
This was good and had some humour in it.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Sami. Yep, you never know what might leak from my pen

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Good things. You are welcome sir