Always my love

~

 

Simple reminders of conscious belief,

filter my mind midst the moon’s silver glow

Satisfied truths sent to spell my relief,

all that my beating heart now needs to know

 

Sensual visions to capture the feel,

bringing the contours of wind sculpted plains

Temptations cry out for all that is real,

filling the void that I now can explain

 

Cloudless these night skies of star sprinkled mist,

shimmering soft on the eclipse of time

Mesmeric thoughts of your warm tender kiss,

found in these endless illusions of rhyme

 

Memories harbor the moments we live,

photograph remnants we’re longing to share

Telling the story of all it can give,

building the dreams now worth capturing there

 

Still, we are standing apart on this eve,

counting the stars in the heavens so bright

Dreams can come true if we only believe,

whispering prayers on this warm summer night

 

Hear my desires a float on the breeze,

finding their way to the one I adore

Listen, my love, for I hope but to please,

biding my time till you’re with me once more

 

Down on my knees with my fingers entwined,

solemn requests I now send up above

Pleading with heaven to be ever kind,

answer my prayer, let me feel your sweet love

 

This that I want is now all that I need,

merely the chance I may prove ever true

You are my life and the air that I breathe,

always my love shall be only you

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Sensual visions to capture the feel,

bringing the contours of wind sculpted plains

Temptations cry out for all that is real,

filling the void that I now can explain"

[willweb]

Sami, thanks for all of the attention you paid to this little poem. I can only assume you liked it. : )

[Sami Khalil]

Very much so. You are welcome muchly.

[Sami Khalil]

"Hear my desires a float on the breeze,

finding their way to the one I adore

Listen, my love, for I hope but to please,

biding my time till you’re with me once more"

[Sami Khalil]

Begging and pleading with heaven to see through your love with its strong emotions and desires to be with her. I hope you get and angel sent from above to quench your thirst and satisfy your wants.
Wowzy wooooo............................

[Sami Khalil]

"Down on my knees with my fingers entwined,

solemn requests I now send up above

Pleading with heaven to be ever kind,

answer my prayer, let me feel your sweet love"

[William Michael Reeves]

The cloudless verse caught my bug in your web. I might even describe this poem as sticky ... with sappy love. But there are also some profound thoughts in this poem too. Love eclipses time. I'm satisfied with the truth found in your rhyme. No illusion there.

Are you like me and find yourself speaking in rhyme. I've always thought an interesting character in a story is someone who only speaks in song lyrics. There's a rhyme for every occasion.

[willweb]

For a while it was almost exactly like that. I know I thought in rhyme and it started to concern me. Though I have always been someone who sees things in pattern, no matter what it is, it has a pattern and I see it. So I just wrote it off to that. I did go through a period of about 2 years where all I wrote was free verse...kind of like being in rehab but became fun after a while. Still I came back to rhyming. Thanks for stopping by.