Tied with a string

~

Know, if I could I

would give you the moon

Tied with a string

like a yellow balloon

 

So when you slept

beneath its golden beams

You'd see the light

of my love in your dreams

Reviews

[William Michael Reeves]

Would it be ok to call this cute? It is.

If you tie the moon
to the lace of her pillow
she'll wake tomorrow
all in a swoon
bathed in the light of your love
that shines from above
inviting you soon
to join her in her dream
following a lucid stream
swimming in each other's arms ... till noon!

billigami

[willweb]

This is the poem you are looking for:
https://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Willweb/2846453/

[willweb]

Yep, I think cute fits. : )
Thanks my friend.

Or much more fun
I could give you the sun
it's light shines for free
as it waits to see
On this sky of blue
is your love so true
for there up above
it sends down my love

[Chris Shaw]

There you go . I told you, you are king of romance. This little poem is very visual and filled with the most loving sentiment. Nicely composed will.

Chris

[willweb]

Thank you Chris, Such a nice thing to say to me.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very romantic poem...reminds me of the song "Yellow Balloon" by "Yellow Balloon"---

"just like a yellow balloon, on a rainy afternoon...."
I like your brevity here...enough said, much felt.

[willweb]

Thanks Jacob.

[AYVID N]

Oh this is so heartouchingly beautiful, my friend. I absolutely adored the sentiments here. You're such an amazing romantic!

[willweb]

Thank you Divya. I am happy you came by for a visit.

[AYVID N]

And a visit I enjoyed so much! You're welcome, my friend.

[Lorry]

And I'd give you cheers,
for brightening my day.
But did it have to be neon,
because its keeping me awake and I can't think of a rhyme for neon either! 😊

... Was it filled up with freon? 😊

[willweb]

It was kind of chilly but I wouldn't know something like that, I am only a ...peon. : )