Love unrehearsed

Draped in the luster

of glistened reflections

Evergreen silhouettes

cast on the lawn

Tracing our twilight

enchanted encounters

Dancing in stardust

ahead of the dawn

 

Firefly wishes

on grapevine horizons

Spider web tapestries

spun through the trees

Pinecone sonatas

the key of our heartbeat

You in my arms

as the night wanders free

 

Halos on moonbeams,

the heavens a’ glimmer

Beauty euphoric

abloom in your eyes

Lips warm and tender,

a kiss in the darkness

Love unrehearsed

under crystalline skies

 

Whispers hypnotic

'pon breezes a’ flowing

Softly their phrases

drift sweetly above

Drenching impassioned,

sirenic embraces

Here neath this canopy,

bathed in our love

Reviews

[Vol]

Will,
" You'd think that people would've had enough of silly love songs." That will never happen as long as there is another way to create a little beauty around the most abused of all emotions. There will never be too many."
Some are sweet and dreamy, some, like "la Belle Dame Sans Merci" are downright cruel. A fine batch of smooth imagery here, my man!
Vol

[willweb]

I look around me and I see, it isn't so...oh no.
Thanks so much Vol. Glad you stopped by.

[Chris Shaw]

Such a lyrical write Will. Outstanding romantic description in these gorgeous stanzas. Imagery to die for. Ain’t love grand?

Chris

[willweb]

Thank you Chris. It sure is. : )

[Soren]

Another romantic masterpiece that carries with each line a feeling of youthful love. It seems a shame to break any of this flow but I loved the ending
"Drenching impassioned,
sirenic embraces
Here neath this canopy,
bathed in our love

[willweb]

Thank you Soren. Always your comments are something that brings a smile to me.

[Lorry]

Perfectly captured once again Will. The flow of this piece is lullaby like and with not a word spare or out of place, if this were a drink, it would be called something like class in a glass! 😊

[willweb]

Hey, I like that. Glad you found this one intoxicating my friend.

[FGFRANKLIN]

You are a born lover and such a gentle, romantic poet. You handle the mood with provocative and tasteful innuendo, then, dress it up in an evening gown and take it dancing. Well done.

[willweb]

Thank you my friend for your always kind comments of my work.

[FGFRANKLIN]

I enjoy reading your romantic offerings. I don't write very much relationship based verse myself, tending more to social critique or pastoral poetry. But I like to read a good love story and I'm an old fool for a happy ending.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Beautifully described in verse and so, so romantic in nature.

[willweb]

Thanks so very much John. I am happy you liked this one.

[Seriana]

"Evergreen silhouettes
cast on the lawn"

Absolutely, yes. It sets the vision in green, tall, striking trees. Strength.
The rest? You have a magical wand in your hand, spinning it's glittering, sparkling tip across the screen, creating visions dancing in my head. BEAUTIFUL piece. Love this.

[willweb]

Aw thanks my friend. I am thrilled you stopped by and enjoyed what you read and I am also thrilled to see you here. It was a nice surprise today to read something new from you.

[William Michael Reeves]

Nice pairings! This is kind of like a series of couplet thoughts. I can hope to get a sirenic embrace. Would that be an embrace that warns of the impending fall into love? Or a love so loud it's heard by all?

Having got caught in a few of your webs now, I see a pattern. Capitalizing every other line or thereabouts. Interesting ...............
(A few extra periods should you need some)

[willweb]

Yeah, thanks for the periods but I save mine so I have a ton of them. I don't like wasting them and figure I will keep them in case there is ever a shortage. But I appreciate the offer.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sure do like "abloom"------------------

[willweb]

Use it if you like. : )

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the description and short lines create the hypnotic rhythm that let's us feel what we see in your poem.
j.

[willweb]

Thanks so much my friend.