Words are very talented, aren't they? Used wisely they can describe everything the eye can see and the soul can feel. This is a most clever write with a little Dr. Seuss quality about it in form and composition that suits the theme perfectly. A briskly enjoyable read.
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1 Year Ago
Thank you so much. It was just a fun little exercise that turned into this. I am glad you liked it.
I love the flow of this poem! I feel like anyone who loves to read and/or write can feel this in their bones. Words are powerful.
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1 Year Ago
Thay sure are, just like how your words about my poetry have the power to make me smile. : )
.. read moreThay sure are, just like how your words about my poetry have the power to make me smile. : )
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Excellent end! Your words on words word the truth of words. Where would words be without words to back them up? This was both fun and serious. I really enjoyed it!
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1 Year Ago
Thanks I am glad you found a few words you enjoyed in this poem.
They are a wonderful tool
Seem to work much better than oinks and grunts
Imagine Elvis doing his stuff using whines and moans and who knows how he could have asked for all that brylcreem he used
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1 Year Ago
Hey, a little dab'll do you. : ) Thanks so much Dave
Words are very talented, aren't they? Used wisely they can describe everything the eye can see and the soul can feel. This is a most clever write with a little Dr. Seuss quality about it in form and composition that suits the theme perfectly. A briskly enjoyable read.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
Thank you so much. It was just a fun little exercise that turned into this. I am glad you liked it.
This was FABULOUS! I LOVE it! It's simple but profound! It bounces right along like a red rubber ball in one of those songs they used to put up the lyrics to so you could sing along. Highest marks I can give both in praise and rating. I read poetry all the time. I have books and books of everything from Burns to Browning and Donne to Dickinson but this, this was fun. ;)
Wow, thanks so much. This was just a fun little poem to write, basically just playing around with wo.. read moreWow, thanks so much. This was just a fun little poem to write, basically just playing around with words. I am glad you enjoyed this so much.
1 Year Ago
The repetition worked well in this. And I don't generally like that, but here, it fit like the kitte.. read moreThe repetition worked well in this. And I don't generally like that, but here, it fit like the kitten's mitten.
I like it! A compendium of word age and the emotions they do and can bring to us all.
Whiny words spoken are like nails on a chalkboard, but other words can be all of what you say.
I am thinking of my favourite words and can't get over how self describing they are, like squeezy and squiggly. Squiggly even becomes wiggly in your mouth and that squ sound can't help but make your mouth smile too.
I think we should all say squeezy when getting pictures taken.
Who made cheers the smile boss? 😊
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1 Year Ago
I have found that blasphemy works good with photographs as well. : ) Thanks my friend. Words, that i.. read moreI have found that blasphemy works good with photographs as well. : ) Thanks my friend. Words, that is what we all are.
1 Year Ago
I can't believe I haven't tried that, although I've heard a few say the Irish not a swear word hones.. read moreI can't believe I haven't tried that, although I've heard a few say the Irish not a swear word honest, feck.
And I meant cheese being boss, not cheers.
Cheers 😊
And that they do! The only thing that caught me off guard was the repetition of line 1, first stanza and line 1, Stanza 6. I also like how you emphasized your ending stanza by breaking up the form. Well done.
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1 Year Ago
Nice catch...at least one of us read it. : ) I have changed it now and am smiling at myself for miss.. read moreNice catch...at least one of us read it. : ) I have changed it now and am smiling at myself for missing it in the first place. So, thank you for reading, for paying attention when you read and for stopping by my poetry. : )
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I know, you were just testing me, to see if I pay attention or not. :) Reading your work is always.. read moreI know, you were just testing me, to see if I pay attention or not. :) Reading your work is always a pleasure.
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