Wishing that...

~0~

 

As the moon

gently kisses

me with its

shimmering beams,

caressing my skin

on this cool

winter evening

 

I stand

within its

amorous glow

wishing that...

 

this moon

were

you

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I have sang to the moon on many tequila and whiskey nights. I liked the thoughts and wishes in the words Will. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[willweb]

Thank you my moon gazing friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Will.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the poem's shape reminds me of a flame shooting up...
"be the moon, my love, and I will reach up and touch you"---
a very passionate write.
j.

[willweb]

Thanks my friend. My romantic side held the pen for this one.

[Lydia Shutter]

Ultra romantic....WOW! Simple and to the point....emotions overflowing. Will, this is just beautiful! Lydi**

[willweb]

Thanks so much Lydi. I am glad you liked it.

[AYVID N]

Dear Willweb!

Such wishful thinking! It took my breath away! The moon is a master symbol of romance and yet I felt like I was reading of it in a totally new context. Such is the wonder of your words!

[willweb]

Thank you my friend. Your nice words are always a gift to me.

[AYVID N]

You are welcome always 😊

[Lorry]

I think I might have been right about the discounts on salons earlier, so don't count this as a review 😊

[willweb]

Thanks man, I appreciate you stopping by and not reviewing my little poem. I feel so much better now.

[Lorry]

I thought you'd appreciate it. 😊

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

The moon pulls at the tides but also tugs at the heart when away from the one you love. This is an eloquent poem of yearning.

[willweb]

Thank you Linda Marie. The moon has always played a special part in my poetry and my heart because of how magical and mystical it is to me.

[Susan 🦋]

Omg please tell me you are sending this to someone special! It's just ... perfectly said. It's a message to be remembered always, simply lovely.

[willweb]

Thank you Susan. Well, it was written with someone in mind but sadly she will never see it.

[Susan 🦋]

I’m sorry.

[willweb]

Thank you.