Poetic kiss

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Your lips are like poetry,

they rhyme perfectly with mine

 

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Reviews

[Dilan Gray]

This made me smile. Short, sweet and to the point. It’s playful yet still has images popping into my head.

[willweb]

Thanks so much. This seemed to be a favorite on the site.

[Dilan Gray]

I can definitely understand why.

[Chris Shaw]

Such brevity and so much impact. Very nicely said will.

[willweb]

Thank you Chris.

[William Michael Reeves]

Do you ever wonder, hasn't this been written before? So simple and perfect. I'm not sure if I've ever read two lines that have more content than this! Do you have a contract with Hallmark? If not, you should.

[willweb]

Ha, thanks. I am glad you liked this. Nope, no contract and probably if I did, writing under pressure would not work with me.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree Will. When love is poetry. We are blessed by love. You wrote everything needed in so few words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[willweb]

Thanks again for your nice comments

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Will.

[Soren]

So nice a thought and what a nice way to put it. I start to wonder what type of rhyme scheme they take. Serpentine comes to mind.

[willweb]

Definitely not limerick. : )

[John the Baptist]

Really? Do they alliterate, too?

[willweb]

You should see them do free verse.

[Ken e Bujold]

so how often do you and these rhyming lips get to swap syllables?

[willweb]

Not as often as I would like. : )

[Ken Simm.]

Oh, this packs a lot into its small ness. If you will pardon the expression.

[willweb]

No problem, I like small ness. : )

[AYVID N]

They say the best poems are the shortest ones. Well, here is just such an example. Kudos Willweb!

[willweb]

Thank you my friend.

[Lisasview]

Your two lines are a perfect love poem...
Lisa

[willweb]

Thank you Lisa

[Lisasview]

You are most welcome Will....
Lisa