Stargazing

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We laid on the beach

gazing at the stars

 

You, the ones in the

evening sky

 

Me, the ones

reflecting

in your eyes...

 

I had a much

better view

 

Reviews

[Scott Andrews]

That is not only lovely but incredibly familiar. Ever since my early twenties I have spent the last night of every holiday making a picnic with wine and a blanket and laying out staring at the stars. There is something incredibly intimate about sharing a night sky somewhere secluded with someone you love. I think you have captured that feeling beautifully and I absolutely love it. Great work.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Scott. I appreciate your nice comment and am happy you could relate to this. I agree with you 100%. There is something quite romantic and magical about the evening sky.

[John the Baptist]

If you are patient, she might say screw the stars and look back at you.

[willweb]

Or she might say...oh, nevermind. : )
Thanks so much John

[Lorry]

I do believe sir, that you are in smoothy mode, with a capital SMOO!
I've forgotten the password for it and failed the captha so often I think I'm now a robot who wishes he was a real boy.
Alexa! Am I real?

[willweb]

"I do not understand the question but if you order now, Amazon can deliver your password and the captha overnight"
Thanks so much Soren. I always appreciate your visits.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Oh, gosh! You are making me blush. You didn't have to tell everyone. 😊

Beautiful poem.

Beautiful you.

[willweb]

Yeah, I know, sorry. But when something you gaze upon is that gorgeous, well, it's hard to not write about. : )

Thanks so very much my friend. I am happy you liked this.