Waves of change

~

 

As I breathe,

I feel the ocean breathing

Here I stand,

a moonbeam in my hand

Touch my heart,

and know this endless feeling

Like the tide,

our journey now is planned

 

Horizons call,

a beacon in the distance

Silhouettes,

now dance upon its shore

Take a chance,

and reach for what you’re dreaming

As these sands,

may wash away no more

 

I have come,

of sailing vessels calling

As the foam,

so silent meets the sea

Waves of change,

will not dispose emotions

Drifting soft,

as you lay here with me

 

Melodies,

are found of waves now stirring

Glistening,

this twilight canopy

Heaven’s song,

in whispered quiet motions

As the stars,

extend your light I see

 

And I smile,

for here we find the rainbow

Rains may fall,

from clouds upon the sky

Still the sun,

now sends its arching colors

In your arms,

my love stays warm and dry

 

Stardust eyes,

enhance the scene so sweetly

Golden tan,

your skin upon my own

Miles long,

this beach does wait our footprints

Now our love,

does come to take us home

 

~

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Such tender words here in this love poem. Combined with images of the natural environment with some stardust thrown in for added measure, you have created a little perfection. Lovely poetry will.

[willweb]

Thank you so much again Chris for always being so kind to me.

[AYVID N]

A poem that stems from deep love and bears the stamp of your hallmark, beautiful imagery.
Upon a beautiful beach in the twilight, silhouettes dance and beg for love's warm embrace.
May the dance of love never end in your poetic heart!

[willweb]

All good things must come to an end but hopefully that won't end anytime soon. Always a pleasure for me when you visit Divya.

[AYVID N]

Always wonderful to visit your pages, dear Willweb!

[JENNY]

“Now our love ,does come to take us home” These lines are so true our loved ones make a house a home . Loved to read so true feelings in your poem . Splendid my dear friend. Have a great day.

[willweb]

Thank you Jenny. It is so nice to have you visit my poetry and leave such nice thoughts for me to find. I am happy you liked this

[JENNY]

Your most welcome Will

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This reads like song lyrics. I think it would great put to music. I could almost hear a tune while reading it. I enjoyed.

[willweb]

Thanks so much my friend. Sad state here though I am afraid. A guy posts a love poem and only men come along to read it. I must be doing something wrong.

[Lorry]

You have encapsulated. (thanks spill-chuck) nature's melody perfectly here. Rhythmic, like a lullaby is to a child or a Mantra is to a growled up.
Now take a bright, shiny gold star and go to the top of the class 😊🌟😊

[willweb]

Thanks Lorry, as Madeline Kahn might say in Blazing Saddles, "A gold stah, how ordinary" : )

[Lorry]

Gotta watch that movie again. I always wanted the stars to bust into my movie theatre for the end of the movie 😊

[willweb]

That would be cool huh?

[Lorry]

I wished the same thing when I was reading his autobiography, but it turned out it wasn't even a spoken word copy 😊

[Dave Brown]

This is quite an impressive offering and well worth many more reads
you are setting standards of continually high offerings
very very well done

[willweb]

Thanks Dave. Seems I chase more people off than I could imagine. Thanks for sticking around.