Behind the dunes

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I saw the sunrise blush

as the moon and the stars

disappeared behind the dunes...

 

I wonder what they were doing?

Reviews

[Re-Pete]

waiting for the sun to have a threesome? (no just kidding). very nice, so poetic and challenging. nice, clever work ... :)

[willweb]

Thanks Pete and...you could be right. I heard the moon and stars whispering they thought the sun was hot.

[Chris Shaw]

I think you know what they were doing:) The moon and stars turned their backs and the sunrise blushed. Says it all :))

Chris

[willweb]

You just never know with those guys. : )

Thanks Chris

[Einstein Noodle]

hmmmmmmmmmmm ... got me wondering too Willweb ... :) very creative piece says i! enjoying the scene
E.

[willweb]

Thanks so much E. I appreciate the visit.

[AYVID N]

They were probably planning a surprise birthday party for the sun, for the next morning!

Loved this thought provoking poem.

[willweb]

That could be. Thanks so much my friend.

[AYVID N]

You're most welcome.

[Dave Brown]

I think JtheB nailed this little beauty

[willweb]

I think you are right

[John the Baptist]

I'd venture a guess that the stars were getting mooned.

[willweb]

That is a very good possibility

[Lorry]

Oh, I think you know very well what they were doing... Playing hide and seek of course 😊

[willweb]

I knew it was something like that. : )