Morning Dew Melodies

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Morning dew melodies whispering soft,

harmonies dream on the wind

Scented illusions of days in the past

and those about to begin

 

Choruses blooming in amethyst shades,

sweet as the day’s precious glow

Penned in the key of “to never forget”,

symphonic breezes a’ flow

 

Born neath a sunrise of violin whims,

precious this garden of song

Petals in piccolo solos a’ stream,

hoping you will sing along

 

Listen as marigold arias play,

now as a new day does start

Find every note is performed just for you,

composed by the love in my heart

 

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Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

This has everything in a poem I love. It is uplifting, musical and has many references to nature. I love your gentle description here will. Some very beautiful lines. Wonderful opening stanza. Lovely work.

Chris

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Chris. I love the early morning with the sun just rising. If you stand out there the sounds of nature are so soothing

[Ken Simm.]

Gossamer, gentle and worshipping. A lovely pastorale quietly described and joyously written.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Ken. It was a beautiful morning here.

[Lisasview]

absolutely loved these lines dearest Will,

Choruses blooming in amethyst shades,
sweet as the day’s precious glow
Penned in the key of “to never forget”,
symphonic breezes a’ flow
Reminded me of the flower "forget me nots..."
I love those flowers..
Your rhyming was spot on which made your poem even more enjoyable...moved well throughout your poem and was such a pleasure.
Thank you for sharing your loving thoughts,
Lisa..enjoying her birthday here in Spain
Such a heart warming poem of love. I just loved it so very much.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Lisa and Happy Birthday to you. I hope you have an amazing day or evening.

[Lisasview]

Had such a lovely day... I always have a birthday week... so, this will continue for several more days..
Thank you,
Lisa

[AYVID N]

A very beautiful rendition from you, once again, this time for the sunrise. Not just that you uplift the reader with new hope but you fill the dawn with such music. The symphonic breezes, the sunrise of violin strings and the Marigold arias play are all so amazing to imagine. There is much music in nature and this poem is a wonderful tribute to that magical aspect.

[willweb]

Aw, thank you so very much Divya. Nature does sing beautifully if only we take the time to listen.

[AYVID N]

Indeed, one must really open their minds for that.

You're most welcome, dear Willweb.