Not a word was written

~

 

Moon light quivers

‘pon sleepless waves

softly reflecting

passion’s embrace,

caressing the

enchanting shoreline

where we lie

beneath the stars

creating love poetry

in the sand…

 

not a word was written

 

~

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Hmmm……I know why “not a word was written” because you set a moonlit scene so dreamy that their Leah bonded into one; the softness o their breaths were but a murmur and the warmth of their souls tied into a tight knot…no time to write a word, and who cares! This very beautiful and it truly heightened my senses…..
Best,
B.

[willweb]

That could be it exactly Betty. I think you've figured it out. : )
Thank you so much my friend for your time and your words about my poem.

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome Will
Best, B

[JD Major]

...omg, I need a cigarette ...and I don't smoke :)
You're right, I checked ... Ohhhhhh & Ahhhhhhh are not actual words.
...but "Quivers" & "Caressing" are ...and the sand between my toes is tingling.
...all this is to say, you've outdone yourself with this one, Will ! I will not soon forget it :)

[willweb]

Thanks my friend...maybe a cold shower is in order or maybe just a walk outside where you live. : ) I appreciate your kindness JD and not smoking is a good thing. Someone asked me once if I smoked after sex, I answered...I don't know I never looked. Badah!!! : )

[JD Major]

hardy har har Witweb! Have a good weekend :)
PS: I'll be doing a lot walking, 'til I find that sandy beach :)

[Susan 🦋]

Not a word was needed! ;) There is magic in the silence of a warm embrace...

[willweb]

Oh, I like that. Not a word was needed...perfect. Thank you Susan.