Not a word was written

~

 

Moon light quivers

‘pon sleepless waves

softly reflecting

passion’s embrace,

caressing the

enchanting shoreline

where we lie

beneath the stars

creating love poetry

in the sand…

 

not a word was written

 

~

Reviews

[Nick Warwick]

I love the feeling of interpersonal intimacy being blended with the world beyond the human (sometimes called "Nature"), for me a zone of eternal compelling fascination. And how the words which the poem is made from point to a place where words have no place.

[willweb]

Thanks Nick. Glad you liked it.

[Red Brick Keshner]

Enjoying the blend of images, movement and twists.

[willweb]

Thanks so much my friend. I always appreciate your time and thoughts

[John the Baptist]

Very romantic imagery here. Who'd want to write at a time like this?

[willweb]

I know what you mean and a pen and water don't really work well together. Thanks my friend

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Not a word was written; but you gave birth to something even better - a poem! The images created here are beautiful. I read it twice just to let it sink in.

[willweb]

Thank you so much Linda. Coming from an amazing poet like yourself, your comments are always beautiful gifts for me.

[AYVID N]

Poetry need not always be in words. It's often written in sand by skin. I picture a beautiful shore in the moonlight, beneath the starlight and many beautiful verses written with ink of love. It is so beautiful to read.

[willweb]

Thank you my dear sweet friend. I am thrilled you enjoyed this and thank you over and over again for always supporting me here.

[AYVID N]

It was such a pleasure to read. You're welcome, my friend.

[lightsong]

Wow! You are not only the Romantic Poet, but the master of it too!... those last three lines lying there, breathtaking...

[willweb]

Thank you so much my friend for taking this moonlit stroll on the beach with me.

[Chris Shaw]

Dreamy enchanting imagery. Moonlight on water. No words needed, just drink it in. Very nice brevity here will.

Chris

[willweb]

Thanks so much Chris. It means a lot coming from you

[Chris Shaw]

It is my pleasure. You are a fabulous poet will.

[Soren]

I love the imagery of the first two lines. This sets the scene and what ever image is cast in sand is soon erased by those waves. No word is needed. Very nice.

[willweb]

Thanks so much my friend. I appreciate your visit

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Not a word needed
All left to ones dreamy imagination
Well done

[willweb]

Thanks a bunch Julie. Enjoy that imagination. : )

[Seriana]

Love this. Simple passion.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Seriana.