Waiting on the sunrise

I stood outside

    this chilly

  winter morning

      waiting on

   the sunrise

         so that

    the skies

         would be

      as bright

            as my heart

      that forever

   shines

     because

           of you

Author's Note

Good morning everyone

Reviews

[Cherrie]

...hope springs eternal...
I love this beautiful poem

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Cherrie for your kind thoughts. I am happy you stopped by.

[AYVID N]

What a beautiful feeling expressed!
Who wouldn't want to be the center of someone's universe like this! Only lucky people find such devotion.

[willweb]

I'm sure a few unlucky ones do as well. : )
Thank you my friend. You make everyone's universe around here so much brighter.

[AYVID N]

As you brighten mine!
Keep sharing more such poetry.
You are most welcome dear friend.

[D. Mansfield]

In my part of the rorld we woke to one of those rare, soft, sound deafening, thick, fluffy, white snows, that collect on the tree limbs,and define the leafless trees in such a way that must be magical . With a heavy blackish sky behind it, I could easily open my eyes and been tranformed to some far away magical little universe. Nice poem Will thank you

[willweb]

Hey, to each his own early morning views. : ) Thanks my friend.

[John the Baptist]

Well, I hope the wait was worth it. She must be something if you're willing to risk hypothermia for her.

[willweb]

I had a jacket on. : ) Thanks so much my friend.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love this
I esp love the seaside sunrises at pre Dawn where the light changes so slow then quickly the birds awaken fly over in swarms then later the sunrise
A beautiful poem and it’s great that you feel that way about someone so special to you

[willweb]

Thank you Julie and I know what you mean about the sunrise at the beach...there is nothing more beautiful than to see the sun just peeking up over the horizon.

[light and ashes]

This is beautiful and so amazing,
100.

[willweb]

Thank you so much. I am happy you enjoyed this.

[light and ashes]

You are very welcome.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This was just sweet as dripping honey. Some people fill our lives with light. My mother's favorite song was always, "You are my sunshine" The words are engraved on the tombstone above her and dad's resting place. Now my youngest daughter (whom mother never got to meet) goes around singing, You are my sunshine. Some things live on.

[willweb]

They certainly do and what a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing that and for visiting my poem.

[Kelly Scheppers]

It's a beautiful morning, a wonderful life, and a new day. The sky's the limit. So, what's not to be excited about?

Such uplifting words, Will. I love the zig zag effect, too. Please tell me you had a cup of coffee warming your hands while waiting on that sunrise! ; )

[willweb]

Nope, no coffee this outside morning but because of my early daydreams, I didn't notice the cold so much. :)
Thank you my friend. I am happy you liked this.

[JD Major]

You are truly a man for ALL seasons, Will !
Neither snow, nor rain, nor heat, nor gloom of night stays this Romantic from an appointment with a LOVEly sunburst."
Another feel-good write :)

[willweb]

Hey, thanks my friend but you should see me mid-February...probably not my best season. : )

[JD Major]

...I'm betting you'll middle thru it in good form :)

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

This is beautiful! Love is definitely a spark that can brighten up the skies. I believe! I believe! It certainly sparks a perfect poem as well.

[willweb]

What a nice thing to say, especially coming from someone of your talent that I admire so much. I appreciate your time and your kind words.