Caterpillar wishes

~

 

She sat in a

  lonely field crying

    amidst daises wishing

  for her smile,

      when along crawled

         a green caterpillar

   

She cradled it

        tenderly

          in her hands

  

and between

      tear drops

        made a wish…

 

The caterpillar

  glistened

    as she suddenly

  sprouted

      colorful wings

    and happily flew

        away from the

    cocoon of sadness

      that had held her,

      

 with her new

       found friend

          by her side

 

~

Reviews

[AYVID N]

The good we do comes back to us. Comforting someone we are comforted too. Her tears weren't wasted. Something so beautiful came out of it for both of them. This is such a beautiful poem in its message. Wonderful imagery too!

[willweb]

Thank you Divya. I can always count on you to leave a smile behind for me to find.

[AYVID N]

So keep smiling and giving us great poetry to enjoy!