Lost between the sunrise and the bliss

~

 

 

A weary sun awakens past the tree line o’er the hill,

chilly heavens cater to its shine

Dawning eyes now open as it’s light flows ‘long the sill,

the beauty that I see so very fine

 

Turning now to face me as my heart it skips a beat,

lost between the sunrise and the bliss

Taken with desire as our lips this day do meet,

perfectly a Tuesday morning kiss

 

Here within my arms I find temptation in your skin,

warm beneath these blankets, flannel soft

Passion swells like dew drops as my fingertips begin

sighs collect on golden beams aloft

 

Melodies of winter drift in whispers up above,

giggles say that dreams have all come true

As we lie together on this morning laced with love,

wonderful when they begin with you

 

~

Author's Note

Good morning Writerscafe.

Reviews

[Soren]

A mature poem of love and by mature I don't mean sexual but wise and full of joy. Lovely

[willweb]

Thanks again Soren, I appreciate it.

[Meghan]

A beautiful poem of love. Well written.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Meghan. I am thrilled you liked this.

[Meghan]

I found it very easy to read . Some poetry I find hard to read.

[JD Major]

...The best part of living. I'm blessed to experience this now & then ... when the Universe unfolds as I wish :) Great Write!

[willweb]

Thanks so much my friend.
And even if it doesn't unfold like we wish, we still have poetry. I know, not the same. : )

[JD Major]

...anticipation often exceeds reality, so it's close :)

[lightsong]

Ahhhh! romance, passion...bliss melts with the sunrise. uplifting grace and beauty what we feel as were read your words, warmth of winter... that very special warmth, I really love when the poem conveys deep desires without being explicit, and more with spirituality like here. Good Morning, Good Day, and Good 5:34 pm from here ~

[willweb]

Thank you so very much my friend and good evening to you. : )

[lightsong]

again... your poem reminded me with a poem I wrote "Precious" if You are interested :>

[willweb]

Ok and as well, maybe look up my poem, "Dawning Desires" and see what you think.

[lightsong]

I was just browsing through your page, and I will for sure read the poem :>

[lightsong]

AGAIN! the craziness of the site plays and it doesn't show me all your poems, please send me the link of your poem so I can go there.