Somehow it seems I forgot

Why should I write each emotion I’m feeling,

when no one will stroll to my side

Merely a song filled with passion and yearning,

now praying for one to confide

Dreaming in colors that glow in a meadow,

where butterflies float on the breeze

Rest by a river of flowing desires,

meandering under the trees

 

Why take my pen from its brown leather casing

and place it on top of the page

Spilling some ink in a nice cursive fashion,

quickly revealing my age

Where none will read as they go passing lightly,

in search of the next future star

While here I sit at a desk made a plastic,

away from wherever you are

 

Can you explain in a poetic sentence,

why words can’t be read like they feel

Is it a style or a strange way to tell us,

it lacks in enormous appeal

Comments won’t come if you stand slinging arrows,

with targets right there tween the eyes

So it would seem that the retaliation,

would come in the form of replies 

 

Don’t put too much in these phrases I’m writing

for I am just bored half to death

Wondering if I would post something stupid,

now pausing to inhale a breath

Would people come here to see what I’m thinking

or figure my thoughts matter not

I had an ending to this when I started

but somehow it seems I forgot

Author's Note

Just another poem no one will read.

Reviews

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Trust me, I know the feeling! It seems the writers who devote the most time, heart, and effort and more often overlooked than not. One either a) doesn't have an appreciation for the true art of poetry or b) they are jealous of what they themselves cannot do. Someone can throw words on a page, with no rhyme or reason, no meter, no form, and hardly any content; and it is lauded near and far. The oohs and ahhs of greatness never-ending, while a truly worthy work sits unnoticed. You just have to consider the caliber of individual leaving the reviews. Quality beats quantity anytime. Lastly, you have to write for your soul and let that be enough. If the rest come along, so be it. If not, it is good for your soul. :)

[willweb]

Thank you Linda, I know all of these things you have said are true, sometimes though, on a bad day we forget. And yes, we are a moody bunch and often these things that shouldn't bother us, do. However, I enjoy coming in to the site and finding such nice comments from you, a poet that I so admire. That makes it all worthwhile. Thank you again my friend.

[Seriana]

Hum, very relatable. When I look at the "views" against the reviews? The ratio is rather pathetic. Then one must dig deep and ask why we write in the first place? It should be a personal ownership, shared with others in a humble way. Don't fret, my friend. Your words don't go unheard. It's just...we're all in our own little world sometimes, and like colors, not every one is a favorite to the masses. We must accept that our art is special and unique even if only to a few. I, for one, am a BIG fan. Take care!

[willweb]

Thanks so much Seriana. It was just one of those days I suppose and they do happen. No matter how much we want to tell ourselves, I only write for myself, it at times is disappointing to pour your heart out and no one pays any attention. (or at least it feels that way) I do appreciate you my friend, I appreciate the kindness you always show me. Thank you again.

[JD Major]

...well, I guess I'm nobody, Will, 'cause I read it :)
I have theses days too, actually that's why I didn't post anything today ...better day tomoro :)

[willweb]

Thanks my friend. You are somebody, don't listen to me.

[Lisasview]

Oh yes, my dearest friend... I am reading... I have been away for quite some time due to being ill with the flu and bronchitis... Just terrible... and because of that I have not been reading, reviewing or writing.
But I am back and happy to find your words.
I really enjoyed the rhyming and how your thoughts just moved along easily.
I really enjoyed the ride and actually just now reread your words.
I think it is rather like a stream of conscience...
Really good,
Lisa, now back and still in Spain

[willweb]

Thanks so much Lisa. it is just one of those poems that falls out when you don't really expect it. Nice to see you back and happy you enjoyed this.

[Lisasview]

You are most welcome... Hope you take the time to read mines as well... There are several you have not read... plus in the next week or so I will post two more.
Lisa