In quiet breaths he sings your name

~

 

If on this eve of glistened skies

when crystal snowflakes fall

Amidst the hush of tempered sighs

where heartbeat whispers call

 

Your mind is lost another place

as moonbeams dance above

In wishes that you long to trace

of visions filled with love

 

Remember as the evening nears

and stars reflect your smile

Within the shimmered light appears

in winter’s mystic style

 

Another who does feel the same

beyond horizons clear

In quiet breaths he sings your name

in hopes that you will hear

 

The one who longs you by his side

as nighttime breezes sift

In harmonies sent to confide,

melodic thoughts adrift

 

So listen as these flurries flow

and in your heart believe

There is a man who sings of you

this snowflake glistened eve

 

~

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[DIVYA]

A poem that sings of the invisible threads of love. There is beauty in the simplicity with which the fondness for a beloved is conveyed. Your rhyming is always so good and effortless, the poem flows.

[willweb]

Thank you my friend for your nice comments.

[DIVYA]

Always a pleasure dear friend.

[Miss Sharon]

Your rhyme and meter are flawless in every one of your posts I've read so far. You are very talented! ~Sharon

[willweb]

Thank you Sharon, I appreciate the kind comments on my poem.

[John the Baptist]

A very nicely rhymed romantic piece here. The speaker is missing the presence of one beloved and hopes that by keeping that person in mind a silent bond is forged. Who knows, maybe ESP is real after all.

[willweb]

Thanks so much John. Happy you liked this.