An angel whispers in my ear

~

There comes a sound, enchanted bliss,

an angel whispers in my ear

When echoes waft a tender kiss,

and of these words I come hear

 

In thoughts of everlasting love,

now sung in heavens wondrous key

Soft melodies from up above,

euphoric phrases come to me

 

With promises of every smile,

upon my face that I might wear

Neath skies of mesmerizing style

and endless valleys born to share

 

For as she speaks my heart does race

in rapid pace and chanted flow

As on this day my eyes do trace,

a beauty that I long to know

 

With wings of woven silken sheen,

a’ shimmer in the morning light

And eyes once found within a dream,

as breath escapes upon this sight

 

My knees now weak I fall the ground,

oh this old soul cannot believe

Of all the others cast around,

this angel comes to only me

 

When then her hands extend her side,

to lift me from my fallen stay

Lost moments of my soul confide,

are long forgotten on this day

 

I listen as she speaks again,

to end my once eternal fear

Affection from her lips to send,

an angel whispers in my ear

 

~

Author's Note

Good morning everyone. I hope you woke with a smile.

Reviews

[Nisreen]

This idea of angelic beings
Is it possible to be so good within that one can reach this state of being
And how blessed are you to have that in your life!

Whether you are standing at the door or made that entry
I say take care of your angel
So she lets you in

[willweb]

Thanks so very much my friend. Yes, when an angel appears to you...keep her happy. : )

[Nisreen]

Since that is something rare

[DIVYA]

The angel has such a powerful and mesmerizing and yet a calming and euphoric effect on you. I love this poem for its romantic mood, its flow, cadence and rhyme. Your words glow and the reader is tantalized.

[willweb]

Thank you so much Divya. I am happy you enjoyed this

[DIVYA]

Poetry beautiful and worth returning to for many reads.
You're welcome dear Willweb.

[Lorry]

Ah, to hear an angels kissed whispers would surely be a delight, but all they ever say to me is "get out you ghastly beast!"
I shudder to think what they'd do if they find out about my secret camera though. 😊
A fine piece of writing that whispers of loveliness and sensuality, that is a world away from the door slamming in the face of people called me.

[willweb]

Sorry my friend but Angels, like Vampires cannot be captured by a camera. and just so you know...the angel this was written about did leave me standing on the door step in the end.

[Lorry]

Dagnabbit! 😊

[Soren]

The title and ending line are a tight weave encapsulating this poem with a wonderful message. We all need that angel to lift us during difficult times and the intimacy of one whispering in our ear is inspirational. Loved the poem that has a soothing flow to it much as the angel whispering.

[willweb]

Thanks my friend. Happy this one touched you

[M]

Another exceptional rhyming poem. You do these types very well. If an angel whispers in our ear, we should count ourselves extremely blessed. And no, I didn't wake with a smile. It's quite hard when it's -6 outside.

[willweb]

Thank you Makhabat for your nice comment. I am glad you enjoyed this and yes, I can see waking to -6 not being much to smile about. Hope your days get warmer.

[Betty Hermelee]

A very smooth, peaceful flow to this poem; you’re lucky to have an angel whisper such lovely words in your ear….most of us not so lucky….hope it keeps going..I love the structure of the poem….
Best, B

[willweb]

Thank you Betty for your kind thoughts.

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very Welcome Will!
Happy Holidays!
Best, B

[John the Baptist]

A very romantic and well rhymed piece. I hope she's still an angel 20 years from now.

[willweb]

Thank you so much John.