Walk with me neath falling snow

As my heart does plead your name

in amongst the shivered calls

Crystals cling this flowing climb,

snow of winter’s fingers falls

 

Footprints on a path of white,

longing but to find their way

To your love this frosted eve

in the place they long to stay

 

Faintly moonbeam’s whispered light

illuminates the heaven’s form

Mystic opal coated skies

gently sway this winter storm

 

Through the branches evergreen,

shadows dance in wishes soft

In this moment filled with dreams,

clouds of silver waft aloft

 

Eyes now search the twilight bliss,

past the gates of iron glaze

For the love within your smile,

here to quell my lonely days

 

Take my hand midst drifting sighs

strolling in this shimmered sight

Kiss me now my precious one,

as I hold you close this night

 

Out here in this evening chill

as our hearts once more do glow

Wrapped within my arms so warm,

walk with me neath falling snow

Reviews

[M]

Beautiful poem of love. Your wife must be very happy to read such words. I love how you rhyme your writings. It makes it easy to read and understand the feelings you want to impart. Exceptional.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much. I am happy you liked this.

[Neville]

Now this is what we around these parts call a love poem .. well crafted & surely written from the heart .. indeed, tis most heart-warming on a very cold day ........ Neville

[willweb]

Thanks Neville, I appreciate the kind words.

[DIVYA]

A poem filled with the sheer beauty of moonbeams and winter's shimmering frost and light! Woven so delicately in verses of 7 syllables per line, all held together by love.

Though all the verses were breathtaking, the following just held me:
"Through the branches evergreen,
shadows dance in wishes soft
In this moment filled with dreams,
clouds of silver waft aloft"

The concluding verse just renewed my faith in the power of love. Thanks for the very special, beautifully metered poem.

[willweb]

Thank you my friend for your generous and humbling comments on my poetry. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

[DIVYA]

It was a pleasure! A special poem. You're welcome.

[Chris Shaw]

A lovely romantic write with stanzas filled with beautiful imagery and warm emotions. It may be cold outside but the hearts here aren’t feeling it. Great meter and alternate line, end rhyme. Very nicely composed.

Chris

[willweb]

Thank you Chris, just trying to spread a little warmth out there.