My poetry

~*~

 

my poetry

is a part of me,

a piece of my heart

for all of the world to see,

beautiful verses filled with love,

wondrous visions of my desires,

every dream coming true,

precious and perfect

because you are,

my poetry

 

 

~*~

Reviews

[Red Brick Keshner]

Pleasing to the eye and to the ear and to the mind and heart!

[willweb]

So it seems this was pleasing. : ) Just kidding, thanks so much my friend. I am thrilled you liked this.

[Amy R]

I love this!
Always give my ALL when writing my pieces too!
keep writing, excited to see the rest of your works.

[willweb]

Thank you so much Amy. I am happy you liked this.

[Amy R]

My pleasure!

[lightsong]

The precious and perfect is all in this my friend. You managed to put it ALL into one with this little gem.
"wondrous visions of my desires" from the few poems I read of You till now, You seem to me to be passionate and imaginative, thus his line was chosen really carefully. Well done dear will.

[willweb]

Once more, thank you for stopping in to read for a bit and for the lovely comment you left for me to find. Coming from someone of your talent, that is high praise indeed. I am happy you liked this one.

[lightsong]

You are so welcome my friend :>

[Chris Shaw]

Really like the layout of these words will, and the sentiment expressed. Poetry in my heart too, and driven by the muse.

Chris

[willweb]

Thank you so much Chris. I appreciate you stopping by

[AYVID N]

I love the personification of poetry here. She appears like someone you love and adorn with the beauty in your mind. Absolutely amazing shape poem!

[willweb]

Thank you so much Divya. I appreciate your visit and kind thoughts

[jacob erin-cilberto]

our two women...girlfriend/ wife and muse...
like the hourglass layout of this.
We start out writing and write until the sand has spent its last granule.
j.

[willweb]

Yep, we sure do. Thanks Jacob