And then

 

And then the sun came shining through

the haze and morning mist

Warming up our springtime view

with golden sunbeams kissed

 

And then we walked the garden path,

such beauty there did grow

You whispered that you loved me true,

you’d never let me go

 

And then you took me by the hand

my heart it skipped a beat

When right before the daffodils

our two lips came to meet

 

And then we lay atop the grass,

your body warm and pure

So happy just to spend the day

with one I do adore

 

And then you gazed into my eyes,

a look to me to send

Exactly what you had in mind,

I pulled you close and then…

Reviews

[Circe]

This feels so beautiful, like brilliant sunshine, the imagery brings peace and a picture of perfection.

[willweb]

Thank you for your kind words on my poem. I am thrilled you liked it.

[Lorry]

Aww... I'll come back later for the adults only midnight review version. 😊
But then, and then works too. Less is more and leaving it up to our imaginations means you can claim innocence of our aftermaths 😊

[willweb]

Yep, you got that right. "I have no idea why they would think that, your honor."

[AYVID N]

A beautiful poem, superbly crafted in effortless rhyme and meter. The poem flows, leaving sun-kissed meadows and a myriad of hues and colors in its wake. Loved it.

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Divya. I am happy you liked this one.

[Relic]

I read a perfect flow of words in this sentimental and romantic poem, Will.

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Relic. I am humbled by your words.

[Betty Hermelee]

A very romantic setting with nothing but pure love and adoration offered here …. Your words are sensual and vivid, your special affinity among the grass and colorful flowers…. I like this a lot, Will, the ease and flow of your craftsmanship.
Best, B.

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Betty for your nice comment. I appreciate your visit and am happy you enjoyed this one. It was fun to write.

[Betty Hermelee]

I'm sure it was! And, you're very welocme!
Best, B

[softlyfall]

meadow sex, very romantic
reminds me of my errant youth
But you always describe love and lovers with great beauty and respect, perhaps i should not jump straight into the last line
You write romantic poetry extremely well. I am envious of such a love that inspires them

[willweb]

No fears, that is probably what I was alluding to. : )
I can tell you, it is so much easier to wrote this type of poetry when you have that kind of inspiration or had. Some loves you just never forget and never get over.

[willweb]

***write****

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful and hopeful dance of words shared John. When things fall into the proper place and love can grow. A utopia of the heart. Thank you for sharing the poetry for love.
Coyote

[willweb]

Thanks so much Coyote. I appreciate your visit

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Will.

[Soren]

The splendor of new love colors all the world around us. You have led me down the path toward an inevitable end but then ended the movie before the final scene leaving it up to the viewer's mind. Nicely done.

[willweb]

Yeah, it was something like that. Thanks so much Soren. I am glad you enjoyed this one.