beautiful memory

Her smile is the

beautiful memory

that my heart

paints on the canvas

of my mind

each day

Author's Note

Her smile was the stuff that dreams are made of

Reviews

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

I've been working on a piece that speaks to beauty and its resonating effects to an artist's mind. It echoes love in its ephemeral nature. Fleeting to eye and heart but eternal to canvas and word. Our minds are an amalgamation of Polaroid moments endearing to us in value and emotion. Your thoughtful poem illustrates this very nicely.

[willweb]

Thanks so much for the nice comment. I wish I had a polaroid of her smile, but memories will have to suffice.

[Corset]

one of my favorite things, like the kid in "sixth sense" movie and his pj's.

[willweb]

I wonder if he "saw poetic people" too? : ) Thanks so much Corset.

[Corset]

lol! quite possibly but more likely a GHOST writer...? lol

[willweb]

Ha, I like that. Very quick indeed. : )

[jacob erin-cilberto]

This reminds me of a very dear friend...she is no longer with us...but her smile, gentleness, and giving nature will always be.
j.

[willweb]

Then that makes me smile my friend. Thanks so much.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

The most beautiful curve on a woman is her smile. And some smiles are worth whatever they cost to put there. I enjoyed.

[willweb]

Thanks again Fabian. You are so right and the one I write about will forever be curved around my mind.

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle, soft and wonderful words for love my friend. You wrote everything necessary in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[willweb]

Thank you so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. It doesn't seem to happen a lot around here.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.