Reading her thoughts

Reading her thoughts

 

~

 

Messages come of a heart that is singing,

reading her thoughts at the start of a day

Taking each bit of the moments now bringing,

happily held as I go on my way

 

Waiting the sun in her eyes gently streaming,

finding a trace as the dawn comes around

Looking for dreams in the sunrise now gleaming,

softly the echoes of morning are found

 

Every day I know there is a reason,

joyful encounters spring forth of her smile

It matters not of the time or the season,

I find my way in her poetic style

 

So as I write out these words I’m exploring,

sitting alone in a monitor’s glare

All I can think of is one I’m adoring

and in my wishes of love that I share

 

~

Author's Note

An older piece written for someone special who is no longer in my life.

Reviews

[Relic]

Love is a powerful thing to lose and it's not easy to recover once it's gone. Memories and desires can crush you if you're not strong. I'm sure you're strong enough and know that pen and paper are always there.

Great writing. :)

[willweb]

It sure is. Thanks so much for your visit.

[Brad Dehler]

Very nice Mr Willweb; beautifully written poem of love. Unfortunately as you point out, "no longer" in your life. I hope you have healed and found love again.

[willweb]

I'm not sure we ever heal completely, but that is ok, it's all part of deal. At least the memories left behind find their way into a few verses here and there. Thanks so much for stopping by.

[Brad Dehler]

Indeed, never fully heal. Yeah, make those memories live in a certain way if not as the "main storyline"

[Ken e Bujold]

a beautiful write to the joys of love. I hope the one it was written for, got to see it. I share your joy of writing for a special one, as I write many and often for my love.

ken

[willweb]

Thanks so much Ken. I hope the same thing but doubt it. Though, I guess you never know. Thanks for stopping by.

[Corset]

Beautiful, sad and sweetly sentimental poem, I enjoyed the rhyming, timing, subject matter.

[willweb]

Thank you again Corset for your visits and comments on my poetry. I am thrilled you enjoyed this.

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know my friend. Reading a woman mind. Could be a dangerous thing.
"So as I write out these words I’m exploring,
sitting alone in a monitor’s glare
All I can think of is one I’m adoring
and in my wishes of love that I share"
I liked the above lines. I am a old man. I know less about women than 50 years ago. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[willweb]

Thanks Coyote...I know trying to read a woman's thoughts is not always the best idea but this was more about reading her poetry. I fell for her and her poetry, she was one of the best.

[Coyote Poetry]

This is cool my friend. A mind of a woman. A wild place to know. You are welcome.